Question

Who can help me choose an ending sentence for my poem?

Answer 1

@linda3 would you be able to help me?

Answer 2

I would love to!! :)

Answer 3

How's this for the last sentence:

Answer 4

So I choose to let it be
I don't know if thats good but it was worth a try

Answer 5

I'm stuck on the last sentence. I want to to make the poem seem finish yet it rhymes with the one before it. do you get me?

Answer 6

I like that c; Wait give me a second to read all together though

Answer 7

Shadows of the depth engulf me

Answer 8

Shadows of the depth make me unable to see? hmm...

Answer 9

Situating me that this is supposed to be ?

Answer 10

nah...

Answer 11

err but too long

Answer 12

yeah too long

Answer 13

Stuck with what I cannot seem to see

Answer 14

Well, you can choose who's ever you want.

Answer 15

yeah... i agree

Answer 16

It seems if you add that sentence that you would have to put a couple more lines in to make it sound finished..

Answer 17

I can't cuz It's written with the letters of temptations. I put S as extra because I felt after I put 'Never can I deny that it has killed me' it seemed unfinished.

Answer 18

i actually think leaving the end sounds like it's finished- in my opinion

Answer 19

N*

Answer 20

because you are making a statement- a final thought - Never can I deny that it has killed me'

Answer 21

Mmm You really think so ?

Answer 22

yeah, in my opinion what about you @Ahlpa_Omega32 ? What do you think?

Answer 23

What do you think Ahlpa?

Answer 24

yeah I was gunna ask that lol

Answer 25

lol

Answer 26

Hmm…In my opinion, not trying to put you down Linda, but to me I think something should go after 'Never can I deny that it has killed me', maybe you should put Linda's sentence, it seems that it would be perfect for that sentence and once you have that you should be fine.

Answer 27

which one? lol

Answer 28

Which one? the first one?

Answer 29

Yeah, the first one seems perfect.

Answer 30

Anytime