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OpenStudy (anonymous):

HELP PLEASE I am writing an essay about propaganda and the topic is about landfills and i wanna try to say "why we don't need landfills"

OpenStudy (anonymous):

can some one help me cuz im trying to explain why we don't need landfills. i think we don't need a landfill because we can recycle most of our trash and well we can re-use it so that we don't have to barre are trash cuz it will be there for thousands of years

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@sillydog @SandyEastWard help please

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@ShadowLegendX help please

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

With an essay you need to show facts that help support/prove your thesis

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Your thesis I'm assuming is " We don't need landfills "

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

So what you're are saying here is that we don't need landfills and you are backing this up with the idea of most of our trash being recyclable

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

So what are some of your ideas( What trash is recyclable?)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

cuz it would be better to recycle things than just Bary the trash under ground for thousands and millions of years

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

*bury

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and some trash well most trash is recyclable and yes lol

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

So one thing you could say is that landfills take up lots of space and it can be harmful to the environment

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Now I know that things like glass, cans, bottles and paper are being recycled. But there is lots of trash generated and not all of it can be sorted out, cleaned properly and put to use.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Now there are several ideas where trash is burned to create energy. There is also of course recycling objects like cans and bottles. Metals can be reused(magnets, iron, steel, etc)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay so my topic is "landfills". and one topic is... landfills take up to much space and it can be harmful to the enviorment.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

But you need to research and organize your ideas. Then put them into a well written essay.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

So those are 2 phrases that you need to look up. Landfills taking up to much space Landfills being harmful to the environment

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay so ummm my first sentence is

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh okay ill do that right now

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Remember to cite your sources for the bibliography

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what do you mean by that???

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

A bibliography is a list of the sources you used to get information for your report. It is included at the end of your report, on the last page (or last few pages).

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Most essays require one

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay and this has to be 5 paragraphs or more

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Ok this means you should have a Introduction Body Paragraphs (3 or more) Conclusion

OpenStudy (anonymous):

How much space landfills take up depends on the size of the landfill. Landfills take up less space than they did 25 years ago. New landfills are called megafills because they can accommodate more garbage while taking up less space. According to a 2008 report, there were 1,800 municipal solid waste landfills in the United States. Today's landfills operate by accepting trash all day and then being compacted and covered over with a layer a soil. This minimizes wind disturbances, pests, and odor.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thats the info it gave me for the first and ill look up for the second so give me a few

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Is that your introduction?

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

oh

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Ok I'm going to leave you to your research and writing :) Good Luck!

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

If you need any further help, just pm me :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

A landfill is a planned and designed to discard solid waste materials by burying it between the layers of earth, in an effort to decrease human heath hazards which get caused if it is left open or without treatment. In the landfill, there are some preventive measures followed before settling the solid material underground. If not buried properly and with lack of proper management, it can be dangerous. The compressed solid waste placed underground creates methane gas and other dangerous gases. Methane gas is flammable. But if comes out in open air and gets mixed with atmosphere, it can create lots of problem for living being including humans. That’s why pipes are placed underground to absorb these gases before it comes out into open. Even some landfills have water containers built underground to prevent contaminated water from mixing with groundwater or seep through ground into pure groundwater. But many landfills around the world are not built properly and managed. Most of the landfills are just dug and all solid wastes are dumped into it, which have added to both water as well as air pollution. Landfill Problems: The older landfills that were built and forgotten are now creating many problems. The dumped wastes inside the ground are prone to make Leachate, which is very harmful to human as well as for ground water. Leachate is a very toxic liquid, which is formed when water gets in contact with the solid waste. The rainwater seeps through the ground and comes in contact with wastes, collecting all inorganic and organic materials it penetrates through the ground. If any groundwater stream is under that landfill, then Leachate and groundwater gets mixed, thus contaminating the groundwater and making it toxic. The people who live close by landfills are prone to get ill with common symptoms of allergies, dizziness, skin problems, vomiting as well as dangerous illness like cancer. Children are more susceptible to illness and diseases than adult is and even sometimes causes premature dead of child. okay:)(:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay thanks so much @ShadowLegendX for all your help im going to finish this tomorrow cuz ima little tired i had a long day and ima tag you in it tomorrow cuz your a perfect person to help me and idk what time it is were you live but its 9:08 here so ima take a break for the night. thanks so much

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

You're 3hrs ahead of me :) Its 6:08PM here

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh were do you live?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

well ima take a break so ill be back on for tomorrow and i will tag you in it but thanks for all your help @ShadowLegendX night night sleep well ttyl

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Ok Bye :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

bye:)(:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

wait how would i start it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

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OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Well do you remember what your thesis is?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

cuz i got all the info that i need i just dont no how to start it and yes its "We dont need landfills"

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

So when starting an essay you need to write your Intoduction(1st paragraph). In your introduction you should state or restate your thesis and talk about it a little. But save the facts and explaining for the body paragraphs

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

This doesnt mean that you can't put in facts into your Introduction

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

No matter what type of essay you write, you always want to make it interesting(in the 1st paragraph at the least). This is called the hook. You need to hook the reader so they will want to read your essay and when providing facts you make the Introduction more interesting

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so my first sentence is we don't need landfills bacouse they take up to much space and it is bad for the earth becouse all of it is geting buryed under ground and next thing we no it it will be all trash and no durt

OpenStudy (anonymous):

u still here?

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Example: My thesis: Global Warming is a growing problem, something has to be done. The world we know is getting worse and worse. With every day our planet aches in pain. This is caused by global warming. It has been a growing problem recently as the carbon dioxide that has been produced by fossil fuels are rising up in the air and being trapped by our atmosphere. Because this heat can't escape it is melting our polar ice caps. This has caused the ocean sea levels to start rising and small elevated islands are already being flooded. Something has to be done about this.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

This is just a decently sized Introduction that I typed out. It isnt the best one but I wanted to provide a nice example.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

See how I restated my thesis in the introduction?

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

It's a bit funny to me as I read through my own introduction and I'm already seeing ways to improve

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay so like the world is geting worse and worse every day. No one wants to do nothing about it but what if some one did and then we can clean up the earth and it canbe a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground id making it harder for us to breath.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

This just shows that you should always look through your paragraphs after you're done writing them. See if you had grammar mistakes or ways to improve how you explained things

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Remember to capitalize your first letter

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The world is getting worse and worse every day.No one wants to do nothing about it but what if some one did and then we can clean up the earth and it can be a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground is making it harder for us to breath.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Also the phrase " no one wants to do nothing " doesnt make sense. I believe you should replace nothing with anything.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

like that

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Also you should put a period after someone did. <------------ And someone is one word not two

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Remove the and after did.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The world is getting worse and worse every day.No one wants to do anything about it. What if some one did then we can clean up the earth and it can be a much better place to live in. The trash under the ground is making it harder for us to breath.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

I have to go for a bit...I will be back soon. Look for further mistakes or ways to improve in your writing

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay like that and okay

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ima go and we can fix the rest of this in the morning okay:)(: night night cuz its 10:03 here so we can do the rest tomorrow and thanks for all your help tonight your an awesome person

OpenStudy (anonymous):

night night bye ttyl:)(:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@micahm

OpenStudy (micahm):

hello

OpenStudy (micahm):

@bbcream14

OpenStudy (micahm):

@bbcream14

OpenStudy (micahm):

@bbcream14 over here

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay sorry

OpenStudy (micahm):

what you have so far

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Yeah, post what you have written so far

OpenStudy (anonymous):

the world today is getting worse becouse in the landfills all they do is bary the trash. Barying the trash is making the earth die off slowly. Also when people bary the trash it pollutes the earth. The world would be better if we all reuse trash, if i had the power i would get red of landfill and make people recycle. If people did that then the would would have fresh air and clean cites

OpenStudy (micahm):

ok one thing is the word Barying what are you trying say burning

OpenStudy (micahm):

what you have so far

OpenStudy (micahm):

how many is that so far

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Capitalize the in the beginning of the 1st paragraph and you misspelled " Bary " it is spelled = bury

OpenStudy (micahm):

yes

OpenStudy (micahm):

is it burn

OpenStudy (micahm):

it sounds good to me

OpenStudy (micahm):

ok

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay

OpenStudy (micahm):

well i have to go hope it turn out good let me know how it turn out

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Also the majority of trash isnt " burried ." It is burned or if possible, recycled

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay:)(:

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

But when you burn trash. you are producing carbon dioxide which contributes to global warming and this affects the environment.

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Red is a color. In the sentence: The world would be better if we all reuse trash, if i had the power i would get red of landfill and make people recycle. You said red instead of rid. Rid is the correct word usage. Also you need to capitalize I when writing

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

bbcream14 do you have a mom, dad or sister who can personally look this over with you?

OpenStudy (shadowlegendx):

Because you have the right idea here but its generally just a lot of grammar mistakes and small ways to improve here and there.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yeahi do but there not here

OpenStudy (micahm):

ok i hope everything turns out ok and iam really sorry

OpenStudy (anonymous):

for what?

OpenStudy (micahm):

as in the fighting or the easy

OpenStudy (micahm):

either way i hope the eassy turn out to be a great one

OpenStudy (micahm):

bye

OpenStudy (micahm):

@bbcream14 bye

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay bye

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