Okay i wrote this poem then entered it into a poetry contest. Please tell me what you think of it. first answer gets a medal.
I listen
I yell
For the inspiration that never came
I want it, I need it
though it does not want me, it does not need me
I should have listened to my loved ones
To await inspiration, and inspiration will come
But I wouldn't wait, I couldn't wait
Instead I pursued it
I chased and chased it
For days, nay, weeks!
I chased the inspiration that never came.

Question

Okay i wrote this poem then entered it into a poetry contest. Please tell me what you think of it. first answer gets a medal.
I listen
I yell
For the inspiration that never came
I want it, I need it
though it does not want me, it does not need me
I should have listened to my loved ones
To await inspiration, and inspiration will come
But I wouldn't wait, I couldn't wait
Instead I pursued it
I chased and chased it
For days, nay, weeks!
I chased the inspiration that never came.

anonymous · Answer

It's not exactly like the one I entered but most of it is. I polished this one off a bit

clalgee · Answer

Wow... that was really inspirational! Keep up the amazing work! I think some day you might go far with your writing skills!!

anonymous · Answer

If no one is gonna want to read this I don't blame you. Its long and I don't like to read things that are to terribly long so....

anonymous · Answer

Thank you.

anonymous · Answer

I like it it is really good!

anonymous · Answer

Thanks. Most ppl are like yea sure its good...can I leave now? lol