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OpenStudy (kmullis6):

PLEASE HELP! Is this a good thesis statement?

OpenStudy (kmullis6):

Equality is a very important thing because everyone deserves to be treated equally, with respect, and with love, and King showed that. ------ Should I leave the 'and King showed that' part out, or leave it how it is?

OpenStudy (kmullis6):

@ObeySoph▲ @hartnn @satellite73

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Don't use words like "very" or "thing". They're taboo. Keep in the part about King, but maybe phrase it differently, such as, "...as demonstrated by King."

OpenStudy (kmullis6):

Ok thank you so much i will fix it! :D @Jackienvdm

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