Question

Is this a strong thesis statement?? If not what should i change?? Even though to some extent Antigone is believed to be the tragic hero, Creon is the real tragic hero of the play as his character matches to the greek definition of a tragic hero.

Answer 1

Instead of even though use Although and follow it up with, Antigone is believed to be a tragic hero, to some extent. And add the part about Creon as a second sentence. Thesis statements can be more than one sentence in length. Just remember to make it bold if your typing it. Also try to to say "tragic hero" so much because it sounds repetitive. Hope this helps

Answer 2

Try not to say***

Answer 3

how does this sound??
Although Antigone is believed to be the tragic hero, to some extent, she does not fit the greek definition of tragic hero as well as creon does.

Answer 4

Yes thats good, except dont say "the tragic hero" if your not saying the tragic hero of what, you know??

Answer 5

ok thanks a ton!!!!!