Love

Love has come
Love is near
My world has spun
It has shifted gears
I dont know what to do
Should i do this or that
Should i tell you to shoo
When you though i was a brat
My heart was broken
But you came back
You have already spoken
Your lies are in stacks
But
I just cant let you go
You to me are a light show....

Question

Love

Love has come
Love is near
My world has spun
It has shifted gears
I dont know what to do
Should i do this or that
Should i tell you to shoo
When you though i was a brat
My heart was broken
But you came back
You have already spoken
Your lies are in stacks
But
I just cant let you go
You to me are a light show....

camerondoherty · Answer

Its not perfect... I hope its o.k... I know i messed up on a few occasions but... Here it is c:

anonymous · Answer

"How to be a Communist"

-Cam Doherty

squirrels · Answer

#perf

camerondoherty · Answer

ty c:

quickstudent · Answer

@camerondoherty , your poem is great! so much emotion in it. That's how I feel when I read it.... :)

camerondoherty · Answer

Lol ur puns "literal"
Thank You @quickstudent c:

anonymous · Answer

And also, don't tell mommy about us.  I can't go to jail... do you know what they do with handsome guys like me in jail?  It rhymes with grape...

camerondoherty · Answer

reshape?

anonymous · Answer

Ye, reshape my retrice

camerondoherty · Answer

Lol im gonna have to close this

camerondoherty · Answer

I might just do some adjustments

tkhunny · Answer

Truthfully, too juvenile to be particularly significant by itself.  If you were to express the same feelings every year or two, just to see the growth and contrast, now THAT would be interesting.

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