Question

Could someone help me revise a paragraph but in different words?

Answer 1

where's the paragraph?

Answer 2

With an extremely competitive market in the 21st century, advertisers have increased their use of digital technology to advertise their products. In order for an advertisement to be effective, its production and placement depends on knowledge of the public and a skilled use of the media. Advertising agencies create elaborate campaigns whose strategies of media use are based on research of consumer behavior and demographic analysis of the area marketed to. With a fixed budget, advertisers have two choices: have their message seen or heard by many people fewer times, or to be seen or heard by fewer people many times. In criticism of advertising it has been argued that people pay for the cost of advertising in the form of higher prices. It has also been argued that the cost of major advertising campaigns is so high that few firms can afford them. This makes it easier for the big firms to be dominant while smaller firms remain advertising locally and online. It has been argued that advertisers influence the regular contents of the media sources such as television or newspaper articles.

Answer 3

I have to redo it because it's too similar to the original content.

Answer 4

i'll try just give me a moment. i'll take some time

Answer 5

Thank you so much.

Answer 6

I'm not sure if this helps, but I tried.

In the 21st century, advertisers have been expanding their utilization of digital technology in order to sell their products due to an extremely competitive market.The production and placement of an effective advertisment require a wide range of knowledge about the consumers and the use of media. Advertising agencies make intricate campaigns, in which consumer behavior and demographic analysis of the marketed area are being used as a base for creating different methods of media.Advertisers have two choices for having a fixed budget. The first one is having their message seen or heard by many people fewer times, while the second option is having their advertisements heard by fewer people many times.In response of promoting, it has been argued that individuals pay for the expense of advertising at higher costs. Moreover, another disadvantage of this method of advertising is the high cost that only few or big firms can afford, which make them more dominant than smaller firms. It has also been debated that the regular contents of the media sources such as television or newspaper articles are influenced by the advertisers.

My brain doesn't want to work properly right now, so I'm not sure if you'll be okay with that. Just rephrase again what I did, maybe you'll end up with a better one, then rephrase again what you did until you end up with a good one:)

Answer 7

Thank you, you're a lifesaver. (: