Question

what can I replace "how tough it was getting a 4.0 GPA" with to make it shorter?

Answer 1

I don't understand what you're asking, what do you mean hun?

Answer 2

I need to find a way to make that sentence shorter

Answer 3

its part of an essay but if I copy and paste it comes out looking funny

Answer 4

you can say something like "Achieving a 4.0 GPA was hard" or "It's hard to get a 4.0 GPA"

Answer 5

Thanks:)

Answer 6

if it's an essay, I'd say "it was hard achieving a 4.0 GPA" or something along the lines of that. I know it needs to be shorter but I wouldn't recommend just saying "it was hard to get a 4.0 GPA" for an essay

Answer 7

no problem :)

Answer 8

It's for my college essay and Im having a hard time with some editing.

Answer 9

Im 92 words over my limit and Im trying to shorten some sentences

Answer 10

if you need more help, I'm here

Answer 11

I hate when that happens, it's so annoying

Answer 12

Like I want to show them my personality because they cant see who I am just based on my gpa and test scores

Answer 13

but Im afraid to ask for help online because I dont want someone to steal or copy my essay..

Answer 14

omg yes because you think your essay is perfect the way it is and then you have to shorten it and it's just annoying because it's not the way you wanted it

Answer 15

exactly!

Answer 16

if you don't want someone to steal it, then I'd recommend deleting your messages when you're done and I'd ask the person helping you to do the same

Answer 17

yea you're right. I'll just go back to editing it and maybe have my english teacher take a final look before sending it in :)

Answer 18

or you can message someone privately :)

Answer 19

good luck hun! hope you get a fab grade!

Answer 20

Thank you!

Answer 21

I hope I get in lol ;)