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OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'm not to good at this so please give me in put on what you think. My arm is bleeding And my mind is screaming But my heart is still beating The lights go black Then i'm on my back But my heart is still beating I grab the knife To take my life My heart finaly stopped beating

OpenStudy (destinycholie):

Really really good

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you

OpenStudy (demonickittenlover):

wow... and you said you were bad.... ;) i love it!!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thanks hun.... im glad u like it

OpenStudy (crissy15):

i like it, just hate the subject,ive been dead nd came back its not fun

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so have i.... just this past year i was dragged by a car and got pushed and face planted doing 90mph

OpenStudy (crissy15):

wow, ithought having a stroke, afew heart attacks ,nd afew doctors wanting to rip u up was bad, not to mention being in coma, were u in coma, omg id feel so lonely now :)!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have been in a coma before..... i hope it never happens again

OpenStudy (crissy15):

ik, ihope that doesnt happen ever,did u have like a dream, during coma, it was like a fight between life and death to me

OpenStudy (anonymous):

As long as you capitalize "I'm", it's beautiful.

OpenStudy (ghostgate):

On the very last line apart of the last paragraph you misspelled finally. I just want to point that out. Other than that, nicely done!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you.

OpenStudy (demonickittenlover):

-_- grammar nazis

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It happens

OpenStudy (ghostgate):

Lol - Sorry, but grammar is important. Maybe not as important to everyone, but still.

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