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OpenStudy (anonymous):

sentence structure helpppp

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Youth programs are in dire need in Cicero. Programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities and teaches them life lessons throughout the summer. Unfortunately the town of Cicero has been limiting funds to these types of programs once the economic crisis began. Nonetheless these types of programs can be a critical role in a young adults life; therefore, the town of Cicero should justly fund these programs as in previous years.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

help fic fragment sentences mis used commas ect

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Youth programs are in desperate need in Cicero. Programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities, teaches them life lessons throughout the summer. Unfortunately, the town of Cicero has limited funds for these types of programs once the economic crisis began. Nonetheless, these types of programs can be a crucial role in a young adult's life; therefore the town of Cicero should justly fund these programs as in previous years.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that should be your corrected paragraph

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok that makes sence :)))

OpenStudy (texaschic101):

nicely done maddykay :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you @texaschic101

OpenStudy (texaschic101):

:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities, teaches them life lessons throughout the summer.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sounds weired

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Hmm, maybe try: Programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities throughout the summer gives them the ability to learn life lessons.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

or try: It has been proven, programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities throughout the summer learn life lessons opposed to those who aren't.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ahh ok

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Youth programs are in desperate need in Cicero. Such programs that engage teens in extracurricular activities, whom could teach them life lessons throughout the year

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Youth programs are in desperate need in Cicero. Such programs that engage teens in extracurricular activities that could teach them life lessons throughout the year

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i think this is better lo Youth programs are in desperate need in Cicero. Programs that engage kids in extracurricular activities, teaches them life lessons throughout the summer.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes i think that one is best.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Disappointedly enough, as a result of the limited funds, Y.OS had to cut the fun fieldtrips out of their organization

OpenStudy (anonymous):

comma ussage plss

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thats really good, to make it better, i suggest saying," Disappointingly enough, due to limited funds, Y.os had to cut the fun feildtrips out of their organization.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but your comma usage is fine the way you have it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Evidently, organizations like Corazon and Y.OS are doing a fantastic job.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good comma usag.

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