Question

Could someone help me reword the second sentence in my introductory paragraph to where it doesn't say college education?

Answer 1

Imagine working at a minimum wage job 8 hours a day 260 days a year and only receiving $16,500 in return all because you didn't get a college education. A college education is something that can influence your life dramatically. In my opinion, a college education is well worth the time, money, and hard work because, in the long run, you will be more financially stable and will have better life opportunities.

Answer 2

@camerondoherty @CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 3

Reword it or take out college education?

Answer 4

take it out so I don't have college education in every sentence but still make it clear what i'm talking about

Answer 5

Ok, gimme a sec c:

Answer 6

Imagine working at a minimum wage job 8 hours a day 260 days a year and only receiving $16,500 in return all because you (chose not to) get your college (degree). (The education you get in college) is something that can influence your life dramatically. In my opinion, a college education is well worth the time, money, and hard work because, in the long run, you will be more financially stable and will have better life opportunities.

Answer 7

Hopefully tht works

Whatever is in parenthases is what i changed

Answer 8

thanks! c: that sounds better!

Answer 9

Glad ya liked it! C: