Question

Students should be given all the freedoms which they desire today for and against the topic

Answer 1

@Miracrown

Answer 2

Cool story bro, but what's your question? cx

Answer 3

debate topic need to speak against the topic

Answer 4

@arabpride

Answer 5

Oh you have to speak AGAINST it and not to support it?

Answer 6

no I cant find points

Answer 7

I have to speak against the topic

Answer 8

could you give me points

Answer 9

Well okay -
1.) that's over spoiling a student - they aren't going to develop healthy character traits

2.) With our society and the environment students grow up with these days (bad things at school or outside or sometimes inside their homes like drugs, smoking etc.) they're REALLY going to grow up badly

3.) They're not going to set a good example for other people... more like they're going to set a terrible example

4.) characteristics like demanding, insisting (for something negative), and getting their way well undoubtedly develop - and these are obviously not looked for in a person...

Answer 10

okay thanks a lot

Answer 11

You're Welcome *^-^

Answer 12

but I thought of speaking for the topic

Answer 13

Whaaaaaaaaaat lolzz u said u were going for AGAINST the topic cx

Answer 14

yeah I am speaking against but I think the for has got many point

Answer 15

bye then :) thanks a lot may be I could send you my speech when I finish it

Answer 16

Sure thing :D I'll give you feedback if you'd like ~

Answer 17

ha thanks

Answer 18

@arabpride

Answer 19

I need your feed back

Answer 20

@arabpride

Answer 21

@arabpride

Answer 22

Alright cx Attach the document or post the essay :D

Answer 23

Students today get as much as they deserve. Parents are the ones who must be able to choose how much freedom a child must get . Students today are already given so much of freedom and tolerance . So if a child wants more freedom then they have to prove to others that they can act mature. No one wants to give freedoms to someone who doesn't know how to act correctly.


Students cannot always justify things correctly. I give you an example, if there are cheesecake and salad, children would most probably pick cheesecake, because it is tasty, sweet, interesting but they don't know the harm it inflicts and they don't know that salad is better. That is why driving license is only for person 18 and above.

Student nowadays often come under peer pressure which leads to some disturbing negative behavior in schoolchildren. School-age children nowadays spend most of their time surrounded by their peers whom they think to be their true friends. Classmates, teammates and fellow club members far outnumber the adults in students' lives. Peer pressure can become a formidable influence in the lives of students. Once children enter school, they form connections to the larger group of their peers. About 30 percent of students are offered drugs by their friends or peers in middle or high school. Just over 75 percent of high school students have tried alcohol. So students make decision based on what their peers like, not necessarily good for them

Answer 24

In a study published in The Journal of Primary Prevention, researchers concluded that when parents tolerate drug use, teens are more likely to use illicit drugs. They also noted that when parents closely supervise their teens, the students were less likely to have friends who used drugs.

Answer 25

is it okay

Answer 26

Gimme a sec to read it :D

Answer 27

Would you rather me give feedback as i get further into it - step by step - or after i finish reading it all?

Answer 28

anything may be step by step

Answer 29

Alrightyy :3 Consider combining these 2 sentences 1.) Students today are already given so much of freedom and tolerance. 2.) So if a child wants more freedom then they have to prove to others that they can act mature

Like so: Students today are already given so much of freedom and tolerance, so if a child wants more freedom, then they have to prove to others that they can act mature.

Answer 30

okay then

Answer 31

Students are dumb cuz they're still called students. Once they're professors, then they can get some freedom. But right now, THEY'RE OUR SLAVES, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Answer 32

hahaaha
nooooooooo we are freeeeee

Answer 33

Imprisoned by hw ;-;

Answer 34

no never

Answer 35

I have corrected it second mistake

Answer 36

is there grammar error

Answer 37

I * give you an example(,) if there (are) cheesecake and salad, children would most probably pick cheesecake, because it is tasty, sweet, ** interesting but they don't know the harm it inflicts and they don't know that salad is better. <That is why driving license is only for person 18 and above.>

* = you should add the word "can" here to help the flow of the sentence... and

(,) <-- there shouldn't be a comma there, but a colon (:) instead

(are) <-- it would sound better if you said: "if there IS a cheesecake and a salad.."

** = don't forget your conjunctions You need to add the word "and" there

the things inside the < > this is quite irrelavant unless you decide to add a supporting sentence.. it just doesn't make sense with the paragraph~

Answer 38

OKAY BUT I NEED AN EXAMPLE LIKE CHEESE CAKE IN YOUR LAST POINT

Answer 39

Lolz - no you can add a a point to WHY people cannot drive until they're 18 cx you just listed things about a salad and a cheesecake then you skip to talking about driving.. don't you think there's a missing detail? :3

Answer 40

missing detail between these two points :!

Answer 41

what can I add

Answer 42

Well you can add that driving is prohibited until the age of 18 because by 18, one has (usually) completely matured - and understand the importance of careful driving~

Answer 43

okay I understood butI need an example about that point like demanding

Answer 44

what if someone asks me then why there are so many accidents when by 18 people are matured

Answer 45

Well think of the example when one is raising a child. If a kid wants something, he/she is going to do whatever it takes to get what he/she wants. SO they'll attempt at anything~ Crying, fighting, screaming, etc... Giving into these demands can affect the way they develop traits.. SO when they grow older and have BIGGER demands, it'll be really hard trying to get them to forget it about, especially when it's something you can't or shouldn't provide~

But disciplining them at young age and letting them understand that they have to EARN something if they want it will positively affect the way the grow~

Answer 46

can I ask you how are you so intilligent

Answer 47

ROFL!!! - you call this intelligence?? x'D Thanks for the compliment but im a total nutter tbh~

Answer 48

ooh I dont think

Answer 49

what if someone asks me why are there so many accidents when by 18 people are matured

Answer 50

Student nowadays often come under peer pressure which leads to some disturbing negative behavior X in schoolchildren X. School-age children nowadays spend most of their time surrounded by their peers whom they think to be their true friends. Classmates, teammates and fellow club members far outnumber the adults in students' lives. *** Peer pressure can become a formidable influence in the lives of students.

(in school children) is not necessary - it sounds repetitive in the sentence

*** = Add a detail here, one that explains that most of the peers in a teen's life have a negative influence on them, provide examples too... (smoking, drinking, etc.)

Alright - that question goes perfectly with this paragraph
Allow me to explain~

Answer 51

what if someone asks me why are there so many accidents when by 18 people are matured....

Answer 52

Dis grammar tho

Answer 53

what?

Answer 54

Well, you can say that even though students in their adolescence tend to listen and go along with whatever things their friends might be doing - most students aren't going to drive while they're drunk unless they've been influenced by peers.. naturally!

Even though they KNOW it's wrong, they're going think, "Hey, my friends are doing it... why shouldn't I?"

Same goes with drinking and smoking~

Answer 55

oops i didnt mean to right even though~ my apologiez /.^

Answer 56

okay but I will first slap that guy

Answer 57

o-o i'd rather u not x'D

Answer 58

Anywayy - now for the last paragraph~ :D

Answer 59

. Peer pressure is a natural part of growing up. Sometimes teens cave in to peer pressure because they believe if they do something, their friends will like them more. Or maybe your teen thinks having a new car will help him get a girlfriend. I added this

Answer 60

those are good examples :D add it right in ~

Answer 61

yeah I did

Answer 62

Once children enter school, they form connections to the larger group of their peers. About 30 percent of students are offered drugs by their friends or peers in middle or high school. Just over 75 percent of high school students have tried alcohol. So students make decision based on what their peers like, not necessarily good for them

The first sentence in this paragraph kinda doesn't make sense - could you clarify? :3

Answer 63

ooh actually I meant they make friends with peers whom they think to be best friend

Answer 64

ooh my goodness I have got so many mistakes

Answer 65

:( I thought this essay is kind of okaish

Answer 66

she is offline

Answer 67

@ShadowLegendX can you tell me what are the questions that can arise

Answer 68

are u there ?

Answer 69

Sorry - My connection failed :P

Answer 70

see this I made some changes in first paragraph

Answer 71

Students today get as much as they deserve. Parents are the ones who must be able to choose how much freedom a child must get . Students today enjoy enough freedom and tolerance , if a child wants more freedom , then they need to prove to others that they are mature. Parents will surely impose restriction on their unreliable children .

Answer 72

@arabpride

Answer 73

are you there

Answer 74

@arabpride

Answer 75

Okay just add the word "and" to help the flow of the sentence... Students today enjoy enough freedom and tolerance, AND if a child wants more freedom , then they need to prove to others that they are mature.~

Answer 76

okay

Answer 77

then you were talking about the last parah

Answer 78

I'll just come in a moment

Answer 79

Alright :D

Answer 80

hello sorry for discontinuation

Answer 81

It's fine :D

Answer 82

actually someone was telling me this topic is not enough argumental

Answer 83

I should makke it better

Answer 84

Well if that was the prompt you were give you have no choice but to write about it, especially if you take a certain position on the topic~

Answer 85

thanks a lot for your help I made a few changes in it and I think its good right now

Answer 86

I 'll let ou know my marks

Answer 87

You're Welcome :D
Good Luck *^-^

Answer 88

thanks too many work three projects 2 orals and one exam

Answer 89

need to rush

Answer 90

LOLZ - Good Luck on those too cx
If you need help, you know who to ask :D

Answer 91

yeah @arabpride

Answer 92

but can you help me with bengali

Answer 93

bengali?

Answer 94

yeah

Answer 95

Bengali /bɛŋˈɡɔːli/[5] or Bangla /bɑːŋlɑː/ (বাংলা Bangla [ˈbaŋla] ( listen)) is the language native to the region of Bengal, which comprises of the present-day nation of Bangladesh and of the Indian states West Bengal, Tripura and southern Assam. It is written using the Bengali script. With about 220 million native and about 250 million total speakers, Bengali is one of the most spoken languages, ranked seventh in the world.[6][7]

Answer 96

its seventh

Answer 97

I don't speak that though~ lolz