Question

can someone look over my paper>

Answer 1

I will

Answer 2

ok cool thanks

Answer 3

I can, if you'll look over mine. :)

Answer 4

I will try LeeEtchison. I am not very good at looking over stuff.

Answer 5

Mine is https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Snndzjs9Om55avvSSTH73CPsx3ojTSQqpFnOsbDncv8/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 6

Try changing "White men and women would look at them as 'a mugger, a rapist, or worse.'"
to "White men and women would look at a black man as 'a mugger, a rapist, or worse.'"

Answer 7

Otherwise the quote doesn't fit the sentence, since the quote is singular and the sentence is plural. :)

Answer 8

Instead of "While he was working", say "While Staples was working", otherwise, it's unclear who "he" is.
It's "misjudged", not "missed judged"
Try changing "most black men are not all bad people" to "most black men are not bad people"
Change "step to the side" to "and step to the side"
Other than those, it's good! :)

Answer 9

It sound good to me. like I said I am not good at writing. Sorry I am not more help to you

Answer 10

Thank you for your help with mine

Answer 11

Okay, thanks! And you're welcome. :)