Question

who wants to hear my love song

Answer 1

i look at you you look at me i look away so you cant see that ive been dreamin of you and you dont even know you dont even know they dont even know that i am faling madly in love with you i wish you were going crazy for me two and i sit alone in darkest night my heart is pounding and i wonder why why am i invisble why cant you see im in love you r u in love with me

Answer 2

pretty good needs to b longer and split into 2/4 count

Answer 3

yes if you write a song to make it easier for the reader/singer it needs to be broken up and this i actually a verse because it doesnt have a chorus or at least a hook its nice and i like it you just need to think about it like i have a song that i got 13 medals for because people could read it

Answer 4

but it is good

Answer 5

i mean its not like im good at writngXD http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/546a9486e4b0db9322923b0c

Answer 6

her thing froze

Answer 7

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