Question

I know its not great :P
and not necessarily a song ( well, idk, I just wrote what went through my head).

Answer 1

You were the best parts of me
With you in my life I felt complete
So why did you have to leave me
What did I do wrong
Right now Im trying to stay strong
But now im broken once again
Going through the times we had, Our memories play on repeat
The memories never left me
but its just mental pain in my head
I tried saving us, but now im leaving instead
You don’t seem to mind, you only seem hurt
I don’t want to be the one whose gonna leave first
I know that ive hurt you in some way
I wanted to be the person to take away your pain
But you shut me out, you faced the other way
Im sitting here, and I have something to say
Before I go just no some things
You were my light in the dark
But now your fading, and we’re falling apart
You gave me hope, taught me how to fly
Showed me the way to the light
Showed me the good parts of life
But with secrets of your own, I can see your pain
I see it in your eyes
I see it everyday
You don’t think that I can
But know your wrong
I wish I was the one you needed to stay strong
I wish I told you how much you mean to me
And with my heart, you’re the only one who held the key
But you tossed it in the river of long lost tears
This was the day that I most feared
Im not ready to let you go
But im ready to let you know
I love you more than words can say
I could go on reminding you every single day
But all the days will never add up
how much you mean to me
I guess I needed better luck
I’m slowly starting to give up
Not because I love you less
But its toxic, and you already left
Im still here cleaning up the mess
But I know deep down, we are truly done
Congratulations, it is my heart that you have won.

Answer 2

i love it

Answer 3

Thank you :)

Answer 4

no, he was a very close friend of mine, he knew everything about me, I let him in, and now he's gone.
But we practically looked like we were dating, he made me promise to not leave him, and he was the one to walk away.
I cant even say that we are friends anymore.

Answer 5

im so sorry i hope he comes back to u

Answer 6

Yeah, but its harder to accept the truth when your desperate to find hope.

Answer 7

just count ur blessings its his lost i dont know u but i think ur a very nice girl and u will find someone dont give up!

Answer 8

:) thnx ^^

Answer 9

anytime ur in a bad mode just call my name! i like to make people smile

Answer 10

Ill keep that in mind, and same here :)

Answer 11

@willreel

Answer 12

Really Nice!!!!(:

Answer 13

:P its okay

Answer 14

@quin100 you can fan me :P

Answer 15

u dont want @quin100 to follow u! she is not nice!!!JKJK!!(:

Answer 16

xDD
you're such a dork

Answer 17

be quite LOL!!!

Answer 18

(:

Answer 19

shes really good

Answer 20

o.o
>.>
<.<
wait whaa

Answer 21

?

Answer 22

I thought u were talkin about meh

Answer 23

i was u deserve to know ur amazing i love ur words it touched my heart

Answer 24

x3 thanks, I appreciate it. I just didn't think I would get good feedback. xD

Answer 25

if they dont like it then they dont as long as this is from ur heart and u like it it should not be a bad thing

Answer 26

love the song

Answer 27

Very nice, Keep up the Good Work :)

Answer 28

Thanks :)

Answer 29

good but i have some pointers if thats ok

Answer 30

what is it??

Answer 31

@Broken_heartedgirl123 @LyricalDevonne

Answer 32

its good you should break it up so its easier for the reader:) but other than that i like it!

Answer 33

Awesome :D

Answer 34

Thanks. :D

Answer 35

it's beautiful

Answer 36

<3 I feel loved x3

Answer 37

its very nice

Answer 38

Thank you ^^

Answer 39

Loved it

Answer 40

I like it great job

Answer 41

Thank you <3

Answer 42

You were the best parts of me
With you in my life I felt complete
So why did you have to leave me
Right now I’m trying to stay strong
What did I ever do wrong
But now I’m broken once again
Sitting here, you were my closest friend
So where did we go wrong?
Where did we go wrong

our memories play on repeat
Going through the times we had
The memories never left me
Oh god, please just take them back
it’s just mental pain in my head
I tried saving us, but now I’m leaving instead
You don’t seem to mind, you only seem hurt
I don’t want to be the one whose gonna leave first

I know that I’ve hurt you in some way
I wanted to be the person to take away your pain
But you shut me out, you faced the other way
I’m sitting here, and I have some things to say.

First of all, what happened to our promises?
You promised me not to leave you, and now you’re gone, you vanished
You took away the pain
You promised to tell me everything
You reminded me how much you cared
And now you’re not their

You were my light in the dark
But now you’re fading away
and we’re falling apart
You gave me hope and taught me how to fly
Showed me the way to the light
Showed me the good parts of life
You picked up the pen and showed me how
You were my savior, fought my demons
I don’t even know how you could see them
I wish that I could have gotten to you in time, like you got to me

But with secrets of your own, I can see your pain
I see it in your eyes, I see it everyday
You don’t think that I can
But I know deep down your lost inside,
scared & scarred with pain you hide
So know you’re wrong
I want you to know that I care so please hold on
I wish I was the one you needed to stay strong
& I wish I told you how much you mean to me
And with my heart you’re the only one who held the key
But you tossed it in the river of long lost tears
This was the day that I most feared

I’m not ready to let you go
But I am ready to let you know
I love you more than words can say
I could go on reminding you every single day
But all the days will never add up how much you mean to me
I guess I just needed better luck
Cause now I’m slowly starting to give up
Yeah, I’m walking away
Not because I love you less
But I know I can’t stay
you already left and I can’t deal with this pain
I’m still here cleaning up this mess
But I know deep down, we are truly done
Congratulations, it is my heart that you have won.