Question

I need someone to look this over...

Stars in the night sky glisten brightly as we walk side by side along the aged house, for the last time. Are heads are down, as we mosey along guided by the moonlight. Once a full hillarious inside jokes now seem like an empty phrase. Old memories ring through our brains, endlessly like a tireless river. Footsteps trail behind our skidding feat. We stop at the old playground set and reach out for it, for the last time. We find ourselves lost, in a familiar place. A place once full of bright spirit and crazy imagination, now a barren land, of broken hope. The once alive animal coops, filled with a deathly silence, a silent goodbye. We circle the yard we once played in, brushed the chicken coop where we would eagerly await for the arrival of eggs. Howled to the coyotes that never called us back. trudged down the stairs we use to play truth or dare on. pressed against the house, once alight with life, now desolated with hate. Then, we look into eachothers eyes, not wanting to ever say goodbye, hoping, wishing. Finally we give, one last final embrace, and look into eachothers eyes for the last time. We dont need to say a word, we already know. I look up into the sky and cry silent tears stream down my face, as I look at my beloved friends face, for the last time. A silent goodbye. The car engine roars, yet she still has that look of hope on her face. I neal to the dirt, and scream and kick and throw rocks hit the ground with my fists. I look at my bloody hands and whisper she’s gone… I turn my back away from the driveway and slowly walk to the hill, the hill we use to play on… the one we set tents up on… the one we made movies on, the one that we would sit on and stare into the solemn sky. I sit on that hill, I do not move from that hill, and I remember, glittering faces natural smiles, corny jokes. I even smile a little. I remember how we use to fight and get over it the next day. I remember playing with the fluffy little chicks. I remember our long walks along to road. I remember catching stray cats in the setting sun…. I will always remember. I remember salty tears rolling down each others faces. I remember long funerals for a lost pet. I remember being the shoulder to cry on… I remember. I remember our first crushes. I remember handsome faces that we would talk about endlessly. I remember making plans to get them to like us… I remember. I will always remember you, my best friend, my sister, my companion, my shoulder to cry on, my other half. I will never forget our silent goodbye. As you will not forget it either….

Answer 1

My best friend is moving...

Answer 2

She goes on the site to get as many people to view it as possable

Answer 3

Stars in the night sky glisten brightly as we walk side by side along the aged house, for the last time. Our heads are down, as we mosey along guided by the moonlight. Once a full hilarious inside jokes now seem like an empty phrase. Old memories ring through our brains, endlessly like a tireless river. Footsteps trail behind our skidding feat. We stop at the old playground set and reach out for it, for the last time. We find ourselves lost, in a familiar place. A place once full of bright spirit and crazy imagination, now a barren land, of broken hope. The once alive animal coops, filled with a deathly silence, a silent goodbye. We circle the yard we once played in, brushed the chicken coop where we would eagerly await for the arrival of eggs. Howled to the coyotes that never called us back. trudged down the stairs we use to play truth or dare on. pressed against the house, once alight with life, now desolated with hate. Then, we look into each others eyes, not wanting to ever say goodbye, hoping, wishing. Finally we give, one last final embrace, and look into each others eyes for the last time. We don't need to say a word, we already know. I look up into the sky and cry, silent tears stream down my face, as I look at my beloved friends face, for the last time. A silent goodbye. The car engine roars, yet she still has that look of hope on her face. I kneel to the dirt, scream, kick and throw rocks. I hit the ground with my fists. I look at my bloody hands and whisper "she’s gone…" I turn my back away from the driveway and slowly walk to the hill, the hill we use to play on… the one we set tents up on… the one we made movies on, the one that we would sit on and stare into the solemn sky. I sit on that hill, I do not move from that hill, and I remember, glittering faces natural smiles, corny jokes. I even smile a little. I remember how we use to fight and get over it the next day. I remember playing with the fluffy little chicks. I remember our long walks along to road. I remember catching stray cats in the setting sun…. I will always remember. I remember salty tears rolling down each others faces. I remember long funerals for a lost pet. I remember being the shoulder to cry on… I remember. I remember our first crushes. I remember handsome faces that we would talk about endlessly. I remember making plans to get them to like us… I remember. I will always remember you, my best friend, my sister, my companion, my shoulder to cry on, my other half. I will never forget our silent goodbye. As you will not forget it either….

Answer 4

Fixed it

Answer 5

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Answer 6

where is she moving?

Answer 7

Utah... :(

Answer 8

and ur in?

Answer 9

Colorado...

Answer 10

DAMN!

Answer 11

I haz idea Pen pals, skype,insta,snappy, fb, twitter

Answer 12

phonecalls

Answer 13

yes just sad

Answer 14

facetime?

Answer 15

@YOUNGSUPERMAN @paki @hotsexyBabe @frogs29 @linn99123 @fallenangelorchid

Answer 16

Does she have an Os name?

Answer 17

Yes we will stay in touch

Answer 18

katbabe but dont let her see it yet...

Answer 19

k

Answer 20

Thanks I just need a whole bunch of people to view it now LOL

Answer 21

@One098 @Destinymasha @aum @ageta @Ashleyisakitty @whydoihavetosignup1 @zepdrix @Cassandra_Lea_96 @LeeEtchison @lexy148 @Donblue22 @Fireyredhead @Locks @coppercab @Here_to_Help15 @hockeychick23 @SoccerChick101 @TylerD @deslynae

Answer 22

@sammixboo @dan815 @Kainui @aum @One098 @Catlover5925

Answer 23

sounds good, i like it :) great job

Answer 24

Thank you ;)

Answer 25

@markchernioglo

Answer 26

This means a lot to me!

Answer 27

i feel like crying....

Answer 28

I was crying when I wrote it so....

Answer 29

but as a guy i wont ...i am so sorry you are going through this hard time

Answer 30

It is okay we will get through it together... Katie and I are friends for Life!

Answer 31

can i tag people in here too please?

Answer 32

yes just not katbabe please do!

Answer 33

there are lots of things that changes among people... but feeling and happy memories will never change... it will always be there... sometime when one feels donw he just have to look back to that happy memories cause that will halp him move on

Answer 34

@KamiBug

Answer 35

Ima tell katbabe now

Answer 36

plz?

Answer 37

Thank you and it is so true! Please everyone comment on it!

Answer 38

no.... not yet

Answer 39

:( how much longer?

Answer 40

tomorrow I will let u get her after it has like a lot of coments

Answer 41

@Donblue22 did you like it?

Answer 42

Hey keimorris all I can say is WOW and keep up the gr8 work! :)

Answer 43

Thank you!

Answer 44

np thats nice

Answer 45

@arabpride cmhere

Answer 46

@Kainui @kobeni-chan @Kfsv10 @kagome @justuu @kewlkatcutie

Answer 47

Katie is my best friend!

Answer 48

why do you people keep tagging me in these the confusion is reel

Answer 49

Why not?

Answer 50

Night everybody!

Answer 51

We laugh,We cry
We make time fly,
Best friends we are
You and I

Thats a peom lol.

Answer 52

actually there is a
grimmer issues
spellings
sentence structure
punctuation
formatting problems

Answer 53

Stars in the night sky glisten brightly as we walk side by side along the aged house, for the last time. Our heads are down, as we mosey along guided by the moonlight. Once a full hilarious inside jokes now seem like an empty phrase. Old memories ring through our brains, endlessly like a tireless river. Footsteps trail behind our skidding feat. We stop at the old playground set and reach out for it, for the last time. We find ourselves lost, in a familiar place. A place once full of a bright spirit and crazy imagination, now a barren land, of broken hope. The once alive animal coops, filled with a deathly silence, a silent goodbye. We circle the yard we once played in, brushed the chicken coop where we would eagerly await the arrival of eggs. Howled to the coyotes that never called us back. Trudge down the stairs we use to play truth or dare on. Pressed against the house, once alight with life, now desolated with hate. Then, we look into each other’s eyes, not wanting to ever say goodbye, hoping, wishing. Finally, we give one last final embrace and look into each other’s eyes for the last time. We don't need to say a word, we already know. I look up into the sky and cry silent tears stream down my face as I look at my beloved friends face, for the last time. A silent goodbye, the car engine roars, yet she still has that look of hope on her face. I Neal to the dirt, and scream and kick and throw rocks hit the ground with my fists. I look at my bloody hands and whisper she’s gone… I turn my back away from the driveway and slowly walk to the hill, the hill we use to play on… the one we set tents up on… the one we made movies on, the one that we would sit on and stare into the solemn sky. I sit on that hill, I do not move from that hill, and I remember, glittering faces natural smiles, corny jokes. I even smile a little. I remember how we use to fight and get over it the next day. I remember playing with the fluffy little chicks. I remember our long walks along to road. I remember catching stray cats in the setting sun…. I will always remember. I remember salty tears rolling down each other’s faces. I remember long funerals for a lost pet. I remember being the shoulder to cry on… I remember. I remember our first crushes. I remember handsome faces that we would talk about endlessly. I remember making plans to get them to like us… I remember. I will always remember you, my best friend, my sister, my companion, my shoulder to cry on my other half. I will never forget our silent goodbye. As you will not forget it either….

Answer 54

Great job @kelmorris I'm sure she will love it!

Answer 55

Yes, I have already revised it a lot since yesterday...

Answer 56

And thanks @SoccerChick101

Answer 57

kelly im sad now

Answer 58

hey hotbabe i want to be yours ok

Answer 59

hotbabe? you mean katbabe, honestly....

Answer 60

yea

Answer 61

Did you like it @appleduardo?

Answer 62

oh my Gosh i really loved it! pretty deep words, the kind of letter u never get tired of reading over and over again, i think ur friend should be really proud to have you as her best friend, to have someone who has an amazing way to see things and express how much she really means to you.. and I REALLY LOVED IT @kelmorris ;3

Answer 63

Thank You!

Answer 64

yw :D

Answer 65

its fantabulous

Answer 66

Thanks Lol

Answer 67

anytime my lioness<3

Answer 68

it must be hard losing a friend. and this close to Christmas too. I don't know how that feels, but I know it must be hard. I loved the words u used, it is really moving and it is really descriptive. I think you r an amazing writer.

Answer 69

Thank you! It is hard Lol every year we did a white elephant together!

Answer 70

a white elephant? and ur welcome

Answer 71

Yes @Fireyredhead it is when you get your friend stupid gifts, like toilet paper, and ruberband balls.

Answer 72

I’m very sorry for you…It’s not easy separating from someone so close. I know how you guys must feel. I moved away from the town I grew up in a while back and haven’t been able to see my old friends for 2 years…I still cry sometimes:(
I know she’ll really appreciate this!

Answer 73

Aww well if you ever need to borrow this work feel free!

Answer 74

@katbabe

Answer 75

por fin!!!!

Answer 76

Lol YEY!!! ^.^