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Ronny has written the following draft for school. Which sentence should Ronny revise in his paper? The Royal Barge The Royal Barge Procession is a ceremony that has been around for centuries. A royal barge is a flat-bottomed boat that travels along rivers and canals. It is used by kings and queens when they travel on bodies of water. It is still used in countries such as England today. Any barge that royalty travels on down the River Thames in England can totally be a royal barge. Sometimes, a barge is built for a special occasion. For example, in 2012, a barge was made for Quee

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I'd say "Any barge that royalty travels on down the River Thames in England can totally be a royal barge,' since "totally" is used as slang here, and slang should not be included in school reports (in most cases). :)

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