i always do this i push away i make you mad but you don't feel the pain i don't mean to make you sad i try not to be hurt by others so i hurt myself instead
@MakaylaTracy @Crissy15 @Marco,Phillip
no pain will become u it will shape you sis
and u dont push us away u make us who was are by helping us in any way u can and u r a great friend ro every one
we share your hurt, and we fix it together
As beautiful as that was... all I could say is... it does no ONE any good that you hurt yourself, even though it may seem like it relieves some anger or depression, there are better alternatives ~I wish you the best of luck~
okay so this is amazing i loved it! however there are a couple of critics i have. When reading it i felt like it was amazing until i hit the second to last sentence. it just felt werid reading that line specifically. The line after is kind of like wow. Also i think adding in a second verse or making it more descriptive could really help it grow.
Its always better to let people you love know whats going on inside...because they will help you till the end! EXCELLENT JOB!!!
great job as always
no pain desi not gain
@Marco,Phillip thanks @MakaylaTracy this is an older post I am fine.. Austin remember!!!!
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