What do you think of this poem I wrote a while ago? I was feeling very depressed at the time, but 'm fine now! :^) @Clalgee @ganeshie8 @SolomonZelman @Whitemonsterbunny17 @HelpBlahBlahBlah @MAli13chineta @One098

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anonymous · Answer

Each night I find myself sitting against the tree,
Hating myself, locking my heart and throwing away the key,
I sit there and wait, just hoping for the someone who may care,
No one ever comes, nor will they I am aware. 
I sit beneath the weeping willow, 
Its leaves and shade make my soothing pillow,
My tears are just fuel for my restless dreams,
Then again, my existence is nothing as it seems.

helpblahblahblah · Answer

Wow...Thats good :)

anonymous · Answer

It all began from a time I am unaware, 
I had no friends, no love to share, 
My heart shattered, the core went rotten,
My happy days long since forgotten.
My parents, family, classmates, they just build it,
They look at me as a mistake, best to fix it. 
They hand me the rope and the chair with a smile,
They play it off like they care for a while,
Then they shut the door and sit by the bay,
"Whatever happens, happens" they always say.
The disappointment on their face when I live, 
I must be a curse they seek God to forgive,

clalgee · Answer

Wow! This is poem is very amazing! While reading it, I could feel your pain and unhappiness. Please keep on writing! I would really love to hear more from you! @Christine88

anonymous · Answer

Thank you so much!