Question

Can someone review my paper?

Answer 1

The north and the south were complete opposites of each other. There were many differences and arguments between the two. They had economic, social, and political cultures that made them differentiate. The disputes lead to many battles and even the civil war. There was also battles that would have made or break our country.

The north and the south economy were alike but different also. The south was based off of agriculture while the north was based off manufacturing. The south had varies crops they used for different sources. They had cotton, tobacco, sugar cane, indigo, and rice. These were known as cash crops. The north had their factories. The north hired immigrants from Europe to work in their factories. The factories would use the cotton to manufacture textiles. Cotton was the most important crop in the north and south.

The social differences were more different than the economy. The North’s religion and education were available to basically anyone. There were churches in every city. For education, secondary school wasn’t an option for both boys and girls. College was strictly for high class and wealthy people. The north was mainly a free willing environment compare to the south. The south revolved everything around wealth and upper class. If you weren’t a plantation owner with kids and wanted them to have an education you could forget that. The only way to get a child education was to be upper class or own plantations.

Politically the south and north were the most opposite in my opinion. The southerners were Democratic. They favored Andrew Jackson and James K. Polk. The north was more of a liberal union. They would be what’s known today as Republican. The north fought to save the nation and keep it as a whole but the south wanted to succeed. This caused war between the two unions.

The differences of the North and South had led to great outcomes. The north kept a strong front and without that we would be a completely different country today. From the economic, social, and political differences we still came out with positives for the country. Many inventions were made and many changes, all to construct a better whole nation.

Answer 2

Wow this is a lot give me a minute

Answer 3

wow that is a lot

Answer 4

Alot but great paper GOOD JOB @heythatsness

Answer 5

Very interesting!!! Lot of information about your topic. Also all the information made sense!! Very Good!!

Answer 6

Check your capitalization and subject-verb agreements.

Answer 7

Honest opinion: ~The intro seems a bit unclear, because right-off-the-bat, the reader wonders.... "which north and south?" .."to which time period or country is this excerpt referring?"
Advice: ~Provide clarification by including dates of the event(s) and the location about which you're speaking.

~So for ex: "...in the mid-1800's,..." [if you have a more precise date, even better! use it]

Hope I helped *^-^

Good Luck!

Answer 8

I'm going to be honest as well. I see some problems in your essay thus far.

I agree with arabpride in that you should clarify which country your speaking of, though I'm certain that you're referring to the U.S. during the pre-Civil War Era. In this case, the "north" and the "south" should be capitalized because they are proper nouns (they serve as names and refer to a specific place, like "Nebraska").

Answer 9

You also don't have varying and/or complex sentence structure. Try beginning some sentences with introductory dependent clauses to mix it up a bit. For example:

Unlike its counterpart, the South relied heavily on agriculture. Cash crops such as cotton, tobacco, sugar cane, indigo, and rice were produced the most.

Answer 10

One final tip is to proofread your sentences for shifts in tense. You sometimes switch from present tense to past tense.