Question

help!!

Answer 1

@EclipsedStar @King.Void.

Answer 2

With?

Answer 3

Macbeth

Answer 4

@EclipsedStar please help!!

Answer 5

we've been over this before! hahha i just dont know how to start to answer the question!

Answer 6

Oh...ok :)

Answer 7

:)

Answer 8

Well, it mentions that Macbeth doesn't trust him....

Answer 9

ok I'm thinking XD

Answer 10

wait where??

Answer 11

It doesn't make sense: "Art not without ambition, but without"...?

Answer 12

Trust

Answer 13

yes, but it doesn't mention "trust", that's the problem XD

Answer 14

Don't put that

Answer 15

without hands

Answer 16

but seriously I can't answer this without giving the answer

Answer 17

"That wouldst thou holily; wouldst not play false,
And yet wouldst wrongly win:"

Answer 18

That could be a good quote...she doesn't believe in him, indirectly.

Answer 19

"wrongly win", lol.

Answer 20

Does that make any sense...? X)

Answer 21

ohh yeah

Answer 22

okay im going to start constructing thee essay hahaa could you check it after?

Answer 23

I can't really find anything on the second paragraph that looks good :(

Answer 24

sure! :)

Answer 25

@OVERCOOL @EclipsedStar this is my first paragraph(:

Answer 26

i should add some quotes in there though

Answer 27

umm, "To achieve this goal, he would have to kill some people along the way. He starts to worry since he has to kill some people"

Answer 28

oh oops

Answer 29

It's better to reword that...XD

Answer 30

ill fix it

Answer 31

Maybe "He has doubts"..?

Answer 32

Yeah

Answer 33

okay i changed it(: other than that its good?

Answer 34

I agree, a quote will help give concrete detail to the paragraph! :D

Answer 35

I see that you're trying to make it as long as you can

Answer 36

yeah hahha to get to that 3rd paragraph

Answer 37

just make sure to draw the reader's eyes.

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:)

Answer 39

these are my 2(:

Answer 40

@EclipsedStar @OVERCOOL any additions you think i should have??

Answer 41

any quotes or anything??

Answer 42

You repeatedly used the word "determined" on your first and second row of words

Answer 43

okay ill fix that

Answer 44

Try changing the "determined" in the second sentence to "He strived to" :)

Answer 45

Macbeth's goal is determined when the witches tell him that he is going to have great power. He strives to reach this goal, "Art not without ambition". To achieve this goal, he would have to murder some people along the way. He starts to doubt himself since he has never done so before, "Not bear the knife myself". Once his wife found out, she persuades him to go through with it.
His wife starts to question his ability and call him a coward. She says that he is unable to kill people since his heart is "too full o' the milk of human kindness". She is basically calling him a coward for not being able to kill someone. She will do anything in her power to have Macbeth kill Duncan, and is extremely power hungry.

Answer 46

I tweaked it a little, if you don't mind XD

Answer 47

"His wife starts to question his ability and call him a coward." Please change the "call" to "calls", you'll want it in present tense. :)

Answer 48

sorry it lagged really bad

Answer 49

thank you!!!

Answer 50

back

Answer 51

I was going to tell you to edit the area where it shows it explaining that the wife is defining him a coward.

Answer 52

But EclipsedStar has already helped you in that area.