Question

unknown self
A guy i never see or heard his voice till now
I wanted to ask what is your name
but i didn't have it in me to talk
something was holding me back
I couldn't move
I was stuck
almost like being frozen in time
you were just staring at me
u had a blank look on your face
i can't talk or move
Am i dead?
I heard a voice calling my name
A bright light was in my face
i hear what sounds like sirens blazing
I felt someone touch me
i wanted to respond
they send what seems to be electricity being injected in my body
I wake up being surrounded by doctors
i hear someone screaming their lungs out " some one please save my child"
I start screaming she comes running in the room
then i final knew who she was my mom
mom im so sorry for what i have done i didn't meant to do it
i have felt horrible for the past 3 weeks and you knew that and yet u didn't ask me what was wrong
why???
you could have stopped me from doing this
but u kept tearing me down more and more every time u said something to me
it would break me down to the point i would cry and you knew i didn't do anything
you kept saying
IM DONE WITH YOU
I DONT EVEN KNOW WHY I KEPT YOU
I DONT EVEN LOVE YOU
I HATE YOU
you told me those things ever single day
i was depressed and u knew that
but u made it worst for me
where u testing me
to see if i would do it like i said i would before
and i knew you would not feel bad about it
you would smile and act like u said nothing to me at all
you are the reason why i wanted to leave
but i wondered why u would save me
was it so u could tear me down even more and more than you ever had before
i keep saying she is my mom and she means the world to me and yet it still dont matter to her
she makes me feel hated and worthless
i gave up on you mom
u always pushing me away and i ended up lonely and sad and in tears
im not taking your love anymore mom im done with you

Answer 1

ooooooooooooo

Answer 2

@Crissy15 @Destinycholie @YouSir @Data_LG2 @emma97 @southmini @Clalgee @DarkMoonZ @One098 @PyroYolka @demonchild99 @Demonx341 @pielover123

Answer 3

Oh, that was sad.. But great!

Answer 4

thanks i tried to give it meaning but they always come out like this

Answer 5

Oh no, I meant that in a good way. I felt the emotion!!

Answer 6

ohh i thought u meant in a bad way sorry

Answer 7

Haha no. It was really good.

Answer 8

Wow! Very inspirational! As @One098 said above, you could really feel the emotion and tragedy while reading it. I also really enjoyed the dramatic ending and how you left s all in shock. I feel as if this is something you wrote from your heart. Please keep writing, I do enjoy reading your wonderful works of art!!

Answer 9

I never thought who was it the mom again? very emotional

Answer 10

I likey

Answer 11

yea this was how i was treated by my real mom

Answer 12

@Clalgee @Crissy15 @southmini

Answer 13

wow so mean,how is she a mother then?

Answer 14

she wasnt i was taken from her

Answer 15

@aayushi.somani what do you think of this poem??

Answer 16

great work ! i personally really liked it :)

Answer 17

@quickstudent

Answer 18

@Michaels_Paradox

Answer 19

I like this :)