Question

everyday without you
is horrifying
i'm scared i'm lost in time
i know i have lost you
now i'm done
my life has no meaning anymore
you were my everything
and i lost you
now i'm lonely accused and forgotten
but with me its over with love
you are my last love
i know every girl says that
but i am not every girl
i am me!!!
but you don't know me so yea i seem like every other girl
i have my own voice
my own thoughts
my own feelings
you took them away
forever
i am feeling lost
hated
forgotten for
i know you still love me
but like you said i don't know anything anymore
i am broke
i am dead
yet my voice is still heard
my mark on you still last in your heart
don't bother wondering if i'm okay
because i am not i am gone forever
bye my love

Answer 1

@BOOKER23 @Destinycholie @One098 @Crissy15 @Clalgee @demonchild99 @Demonx341 @marieislearning @sapphire_waterfury @horsegirl27

Answer 2

yes?

Answer 3

feed back?

Answer 4

OH my gaash...so touching and just...wooow!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 5

@chainedecho @babygirl87 @YouSir @WWWHHHAAATTT? @Data_LG2 @redeemed1312 @CaseyCarns @Destinymasha

Answer 6

i am forgetting alot of friends

@J-bird @j.youmans @j57 @CheesecakeKitten @k_lynn @KissMyAxe @kittycat123

Answer 7

It's a really great whatever it is. Great job. I wasn't sure if this was a poem or a song.

Answer 8

that is really touching at the heart I love your poetry

Answer 9

*Claps* wonderful at time like those you turn to god and he will watch over you because he loves you and he cares for you he will carry your soul when you are down just like that but when you get on your feet again make sure you say "thank you for watching me." and you love him though and though or for billions and billions of years.

Answer 10

*these

Answer 11

@ispike @linda360 @sammy1313 @FlufflePuffle @Librarian @uChezzy @Sam_Bruce159

Answer 12

feed back plz

Answer 13

I love it and no clue

Answer 14

its good, its nice to see somone other than me that can truely expres feelings in writing, i used to hate it, but i kind of like it now. @MakaylaTracy

Answer 15

thank u

Answer 16

i love it

Answer 17

its good but it needs punctuation

Answer 18

i will go back and add punctuation

Answer 19

this is my last writing i see they are not getting really good views so i need to just work on them more than i am now to make them better and stop writing about love and heart break and tears and cries and darkness and writing about just anything but those things and maybe it will make me a better person i don't want anyone to post a comment till i'm gone today bc it will make me wanna try to make it all better by having people post something to make me feel better but i don't need to feel better i just need to leave but i cant so i'm done writing thank you to all who has posted to my poems and gave me medals i wish i could have gave every single one of you a medal but it don't give me a button to click so i love you all and have a great life and keep up all of the good work
desi i hope everything works out in your case you sir every thing will be okay crissy i love u and everyone else keep writing singing and anything else i'm missing i have a bead memo have fun everyone most of you don't know me but if u do i only doing this to make every thing better between us we seem to be drifting away so why no leave if this is happening i don't have an answer for that at this time but i hope everyone understands if no just ask around and if no one cares i will not have any responses back from anyone and that is fine i am one person i haven't made a difference in anyone's life i will be okay i promise........................................................ i can't promise anything so if u hear about this message or read this message i hope u understand just read my BIO for open study

Answer 20

i am broke
i am dead
yet my voice is still heard
my mark on you still last in your heart
don't bother wondering if i'm okay
because i am not i am gone forever
bye my love a note to ur love 1 uh-mazing!!!!!! love it

Answer 21

thanks read above your post thanks @Crissy15

Answer 22

no prob

Answer 23

@quickstudent

Answer 24

Hey that poem was great. You express feelings through writing so well

Answer 25

thxs

Answer 26

<3 :)

Answer 27

Keep it up Makayla, I can't wait to see more

Answer 28

I love it please do more :)

Answer 29

im not doing anymore writings

Answer 30

please dont stop

Answer 31

Please continue writing your fans don't want youto stop

Answer 32

i cant stand writing anymore it getting old writng about what i feel is right to write about

Answer 33

is this to much????

Answer 34

No is not

Answer 35

kk thanks but im not sure i cant write anymore