Question

poem

Answer 1

Normality of Abnormality


We were erased,
because we tried to escape
the madness,
of there bleeding hands.
So now were a pebble
in a different bowl
Sinking to the bottom,
but at least were told to swim.
Supported by the surrounded.
Outcasts is who we all are
but never more the same.
Told to be yourself,
and they actually mean it.
So the mask is no longer present!
...Unless around you.
Then it's stapled on once again
but at least this time I have friends
to patch me up.
Whiles yours are just faces
never a soul behind the door,
because you just do as youre told.
And I may be weird
But at least i dont have to feel alone
Because I know i dont have to be another
one of societies clones.]

Answer 2

Love critics or compliments lol either is fine.

Answer 3

@MakaylaTracy
@RochlenAdam9
@cupcakerain
@fallenangelorchid
@iheartfood

Answer 4

@Elsa213
@dan815
@Directrix

Answer 5

@horsegirl27
@aasyushi.somani
@LittleRedRiding
@demonchild99

Answer 6

Love love love that poem it's very intriguing and well-written. Great job!

Answer 7

@Nerdgirl thank u so glad u liked it

Answer 8

The only thing I'd correct is youre should be you're. but that's minor.

Answer 9

@quin100
@PoetryPrincess
@Crissy15

Answer 10

yea i wasnt to worried about that lol like i realized that and well laziness lol but thanks for letting me know @Nerdgirl

Answer 11

@Compassionate
@mathmate

Answer 12

I like it! Good job!

Answer 13

@horsegirl27 thanks

Answer 14

@~*Ashtyn*~

Answer 15

I like it! :D

Answer 16

@~*Ashtyn*~ im so glad

Answer 17

haha yeah only minor issues where "there" should be "their", "were" should be "we're", and "societies" should be "society's" but that's about it, just grammatical things!

great job! I especially like the last three lines, about not being alone, not having to be another clone--very smooth flowing with a powerful message! :)

Answer 18

Lol yea thanks @iheartfood im super dyslexic so i dont always catch those things thanks

Answer 19

np:) you wrote a beautiful poem!

Answer 20

thanks @iheart food