Question

Help please

Answer 1

Dude. At least say please.

Answer 2

?

Answer 3

thanks though...

Answer 4

Are people not helping you?

Answer 5

Nope, not yet...

Answer 6

think you can help?

Answer 7

Awww... :( I will try. I have done this assignment before... It was a pain in the butt but i did it... So. What lesson is this?

Answer 8

3.07

Answer 9

Captivate your Audience

Answer 10

Okay... Hold a sec. Okay?

Answer 11

sure

Answer 12

Okay... I got a 90% on it...

Answer 13

still an A ;)

Answer 14

right now, I need main ideas for the bridge

Answer 15

Okay... Umm... Hold on a sec please... :)

Answer 16

So i guess the brigde is the reason or point really that you are trying to make to connect your thesis statement with your hook... Does that makes sense? :/

Answer 17

yes

Answer 18

Okay... Soo... Is that all you really need help with?

Answer 19

I just need an idea for a bridge?

Answer 20

oh and @KyanTheDoodle thanks for telling me to say please, i guess i forgot that when i posted it ;)

Answer 21

Lol, no problem?

Answer 22

Okay... Well umm... May i see your first paragraph?

Answer 23

fist paragraph? i should have everything above?

Answer 24

Oh... Sorry... :{

Answer 25

Okay... Well... I see your thesis statement but i do not see your hook... Sorry to ask... :( But in order for me to help you i need to read both parts...

Answer 26

it should be #3

Answer 27

Oh... I guess it was the question marks that got in my way... lol! :p

Answer 28

:)

Answer 29

Umm... Well let me show you what i said... But you cannot copy it in any way or else we could get in trouble... Okay?

Answer 30

ya of course

Answer 31

just as an example

Answer 32

Yeah... :)

Answer 33

The color of peoples' skin is the first thing that is noticed. Throughout history people have judged and mistreated people because they were of the wrong race. Why did they do this? A prime example of this is the racial tension between blacks and whites. The driving force behind this tension is the past. For many years blacks were mistreated and abused based solely on the color of their skin. No one had the guts to change that but Martin Luther King Jr. himself.

Answer 34

This is what i put...

Answer 35

For many years blacks were mistreated and abused based solely on the color of their skin. No one had the guts to change that but Martin Luther King Jr. himself.
----This would be the thesis statement right?

Answer 36

@Tootles143 ?

Answer 37

and whats the hook here?

Answer 38

That is the brigde i used for mine...

Answer 39

Thats all just the bridge

Answer 40

Yeah...

Answer 41

so then what was your hook and thesis, how did you connect it?

Answer 42

umm... Okay let me see...

Answer 43

This is my thesis statement...
Martin Luther King Jr. uses figurative languages like personification and rhetorical questions to express his feelings about segregation, and to encourage the clergymen to end the injustice, also he uses structure to say his point of view in an orderly fashion and to give reason for his doings and proof to show that he had the right for his doings.

Answer 44

This is my hook...
Race. It is a word that is associated with many thoughts, words, and emotions.

Answer 45

yes, the thesis is sort of like mine, the hook- thats the definition of race?

Answer 46

@Tootles143

Answer 47

i guess i didnt know the full meaning of the hook.

Answer 48

\(\Huge\cal\color{lime}{Thanks!}\) @Tootles143

Answer 49

Oh... Sorry... I got my internet kicked me offline... So was i of help?

Answer 50

yes thx

Answer 51

Aww... Your welcome. I felt like i was supposed to help because no one helped me... I know how you fell...

Answer 52

;)

Answer 53

Okay... Well... Bye! :)

Answer 54

what did u guys do?

Answer 55

They were helping each other... :)