Poetry please give honest answers

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anonymous · Answer

A girl in the dark,

A girl with anger,

the bullied,

the teased,

the sliced and battered.

A girl in a room,

A girl left to bully,

A girl to defend,

A girl the angonist 

...but the protagonist is the same.



We fight eachother 

as seperate 

as whole

to defend 

to bleed

to be killed 

by the free?

By ourselves,

by the moon 

by the trees.

Stuck inside 

emotions colliding 

and youre fighting, the mirror.

anonymous · Answer

This is a really good poem

anonymous · Answer

@veronicamaria28 thanks

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

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clalgee · Answer

Hello @ispike !

You poem was very emotional. I felt many things while reading your poem such as: sadness, hate, anger, and even confusion. I think that you should use more Figurative Language. It transforms your poem entirely! 

I love how you said: you're fighting, the mirror.

It changes the entire essence of the poem. (which is a good thing.) 
Great work! Please keep on writing!

cookiemonster2412 · Answer

That was great. Never stop writing ^-^

anonymous · Answer

lol thanks @Clalgee this poem was a little different than my normal writings so im glad you liked it.

anonymous · Answer

@cookiemonster2412 lol thank u

anonymous · Answer

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haleyelizabeth2017 · Answer

That is really good! Keep up the great work :)

nickmeneses1997 · Answer

it was really good and emotional :(

nickmeneses1997 · Answer

did describe u :(

anonymous · Answer

@nickmeneses1997 thank you and it use to

anonymous · Answer

@haleyelizabeth2017  thank you

anonymous · Answer

I like the way you ended it

anonymous · Answer

@southmini thanks

anonymous · Answer

welcome

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

Wow, I just read this and thought that it was amazing!!!!

anonymous · Answer

like it

anonymous · Answer

thanks

anonymous · Answer

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