Question

All alone in my room I sit.
Silent and thinking I should just quit.
I'm fat, I'm ugly runs through my mind.
Saying to myself "I should leave it all behind.
All the pain I feel tonight, just take my life. I could do it out of sight, I could use a knife."

I shake my head and close my eyes, trying to escape these painful cries. Ignore the blood, ignore the dread, ignore the thought running through my head. Who would love a girl with scars on her wrist, with an ugly past with a awful twist?

Answer 1

Did u make this?

Answer 2

Yup. All mine. I know not that good.

Answer 3

omg hun..... beautiful hun made me cry a little, but amazing : )

Answer 4

to bad its true.

Answer 5

WOW! @Pariah.Rebel101

Your writing is one of a kind! The rhythm beneath the poem just flows like a stream of water. Your rhymes are just wonderful! I could feel the pain and misery within the person being described in the poem. Whomever this girl is, she is everything but the opposite. Strong and experienced.

I would love to hear more from you. Writing is an extreme privilege but it's also a gift. It's a gift to yourself and it's a gift of giving a story to someone. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

Answer 6

data likes it <3

Answer 7

Thanks @Data_LG2

Answer 8

This was extraordinary! I agree with @Clalgee on everything they said!!

Answer 9

Thank you! @CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 10

Your Welcome.

Answer 11

Its great.
This was so good that I thought that u have got this from a book made from a famous artist
This was 2 good 2 be true

Answer 12

okay so the only thing i would say is say scars on my wrists a little differently. It messes up the flow a little bit. Like theres too many words or something. I really like everything else and thought it was so emotional and a tad bit triggering. I loved it anyways. u made a connection with me. If u ever want to talk im here.