Question

This poem is based on my crush : )

Answer 1

If I ever were to say who I want to love forever,
that person would be you.
If I ever were to smile just by a thought,
I know that my heart had come true.
You're my friend, but i love you.
I know it's hard to express,
w/ the world looking on us,
but you're the one for me,
that feeling I can trust,
for just one moment, look into my eyes
so that we can fall in love,
and together live our lives.

Answer 2

@cookiemonster2412 @DullJackel09 @jabez177 @Mesopretty @jordanloveangel @demonchild99 c:

Answer 3

That's a nice poem @ilovewolf Bravo ~Round of applause~ to Katey :)

Answer 4

Gracias Steven <3 : )

Answer 5

wow boo its very great

Answer 6

De nada Senorita :)

Answer 7

Thx Boo! :*

Answer 8

np :*

Answer 9

omg amazing boo!

Answer 10

lol thx

Answer 11

ju welcome

Answer 12

I love it Kate, its reaalllyyyy cute!!

Never stop writing <333

Answer 13

Thx Leila!

And I'll see <333

Answer 14

wowzer

Answer 15

its very good but heres the thing. Everytime i read a love poem i feel like ive read it a million other times. Its got great voice and structure but only one meaning. Its also right there. For poetry i like to read things and have to think about this u left no room to think about this. Use some figurative lagnague or something to make your poem pop.

Also poetry is about the writer so if u think its perfect than it is. And i really did think it was good maybe just a little cliche is all

Answer 16

Awww wifey u write such beautiful things ^-^ <3