poem please critic or telling me what u think love honesty

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anonymous · Answer

Just watching through a window,

thats all she may do.

Waiting for a goner 

that will never come through.

Standing for his absence,

Denial was good. 

Struggling without him.

The money's no use.

Waves crashing by

she hears the ocean ring.

Yearning for a ship 

that will never come in...

Feeling lost and uncertain

she wont give up now. 

Stranggled by the fan 

feet wont touch the ground.

Just watching through a window 

because thats her only excuse.

Just waiting for a dead man 

because now she is too.

anonymous · Answer

@makaylatracy

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

All of your stuff is amazing and this is no exception. this one kind of reminded me of "The Hanging Tree" poem in the hunger games

anonymous · Answer

@geneticrockhopper247 awe i love that song!!! lol and yea i could see that. Its called Widows Peek. And thank u

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

you're welcome. I love that song, too.

anonymous · Answer

@inowalst @Crissy15 @demonchild99 @ilovewolf @redriding @ilovefood

anonymous · Answer

great poem keep up the gtreat work

anonymous · Answer

@MakaylaTracy  thanks

inowalst · Answer

It's great. As I just said, before you finish your poems/stories, grammar/punctuation checks are good to do, other then that, great work.

anonymous · Answer

well punctuation isnt norm a big deal in poetry and grammar is and it isnt. But i do check over i just dont see certain things because of my disabilities but i norm have my best friend look over my stories

inowalst · Answer

Ah alright, I was just telling you, but you're a great writer/poet! ^_^ Keep up the great work.

anonymous · Answer

Great work! I'm studying poetry now in school.