Question

Help me finish my paper? I just want help please

Answer 1

Comment yes if you can help

Answer 2

whats the context?

Answer 3

I'm writing an essay on microorganisms and it is mainly about culture media

Answer 4

Okay, shoot. What is exactly the kind of help you need?

Answer 5

Sure we can help

Answer 6

Thank you! Just give me a second my computer is so slow

Answer 7

you can get just about any info you need from this
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Microorganism

Answer 8

Sure i can help

Answer 9

Sorry!! My internet is lagging

Answer 10

Its alright
And you should NEVER use Wiki when looking stuff up for research or any other info

Answer 11

ANYBODY can get on Wiki and put the wrong info

Answer 12

It could completely RUIN your whole Paper

Answer 13

Go to google and look up Microorganism facts and click on anything but Wiki.

Answer 14

Even a video could help you with your paper

Answer 15

Okay. I'm on my phone commenting because my computer is slow and I'm trying to show y'all what I've done so far

Answer 16

What I have done
1. Choose research
topic.
2. Write thesis.
3. Gather reference
materials.
4. Write introduction
section of paper.
5. Begin body of
research paper.


Checkpoint 2- what I need now
1. Finish body of
paper.
2. Write conclusion,
appendix, and
bibliography.
3. Begin to proofread
and edit rough draft

Answer 17

Okay
Like i said NO Wikii

Answer 18

Okay what do you need help with then?

Answer 19

It's loading one sec

Answer 20

okay there's what I have done. I just need help like finishing it

Answer 21

Okay so what you need to do is restate what you said in your opening paragragh but in a way that concludes the whole paper all together.

Answer 22

And that is VERY Neat just btw

Answer 23

@love_to_love_you

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How would I do that?

Answer 25

@animallover317

Answer 26

you can use wikipedia
you just gotta check the info with other sources

Answer 27

microscopic and are usually known for producing diseases to animals and human beings.
this sentence is VERY wrong

Answer 28

of microorganisms ONLY minority are responsible for causing diseases
MAJORITY are not disease causing
in fact we as human beings are more of microorganisms that humans

Answer 29

I have a pdf which is very good and it talks about human microbiome
in other words it talks about microorganisms we have inside us and how they help us & that only minority causes diseases

Answer 30

Even though all of the microorganisms have the same nutritional requirements, there is diversity as to the use of organic and inorganic substances which comprise the culture medium.
no not all organisms do not have same nutritional requirements, its different
& the culture medium has to fit all the requirements of the particular microorganisms such as bacteria for example
culture medias are mostly used to get a pure culture of microorganism, in other words ONLY 1 microorganism has to grow and colonize in that culture & thus we have to be careful not to contaminate it
which is why we have to use sterilized stuff while working with the culture

The culture media varies in form and composition (good job - here you are absolutely right, they do vary which is why they can be used only for specific type of microorganisms, for example: blood agar culture medium is used for microorganisms that prefer blood medium) and is dependent on the species to be cultured. Some media contain solutions of salts and can be supplemented with one or two organic compounds while some other media contains complex ingredients like extracts of plant and animal tissues.

Answer 31

Interesting topic! I agree with no wiki for usage as a BASE. It is okay to begin there but makes sure that when you write information from there to back it up from other sites. Like "Microorganisms vary in types. Some cause damage to human health while others improve the immune system." If wiki says that, keep it in mind. When you read other sources and it backs that statement up then you will have a stronger report. DO NOT FOR THE LOVE OF GOD USE WIKI AS A SOLE RESOURCE, COPY & PASTE, OR RELY ON IT. It could be used to supplement your research but be really careful.

I am not sure if you are supposed to cite your sources. If anything use Easybib.com they make free citations for you in MLA format.

Answer 32

@somy are you using a computer?

Answer 33

Thesis: Microorganisms play a crucial role within the human body, either ensuring that it functions properly and remains healthy or destroys and attempts to synthesize. Even though most hosts such as bacteria are in fact parasites which divide themselves to ensure survival of its species.
Thesis is correct while the next sentence is wrong - "most of 'host' such as bacteria"
1- host is not bacteria or microorganism
Host is US human cells or animal cells or whatever cell/organism that is INVADED BY microorganism/ bacteria

2- not all are parasites
3- we do have a LOT of bacteria in us that are living within us and we have symbiotic relationships with them, we give them nutrition and habitat, while they give us genetic diversity, help immune system (yes, even fight diseases with our immune system cells), help in digestion of complex food etc

Answer 34

@love_to_love_you are u there? did i make it too complicated?

Answer 35

It's not too complicated it is hard to just understand it because I have to keep scrolling. Could you highlight the things I did wrong and put all this in the file so I can see it all in one place?

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@Somy

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my teacher gave me a 100 on the part I showed you so I mean I think it is right if she didn\t say anything

Answer 38

well i have done microbiology course & i am a med student so i have learnt the details of general microbiology (for this year) so maybe you guys are not required to know as much as i know
but the points i mentioned are wrong - they are really important in microbiology
but if your teacher says its good, then just keep going with it :3

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sorry os is lagging =_=

Answer 40

I think she is just looking for participation or something lol anyways, would you mind just helping me continue the rest of the paper? I think I'll leave what I've already done alone

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I really do appreciate your help btw

Answer 42

sure ofc
but what do u want to include? tell me what u wanna talk about in the rest of it
i'll give u ideas as to how to do it & what to write
if i do know about it :P

Answer 43

Well I was thinking the nature of culture media? anything that would meet the requirements of what I showed you

Answer 44

Finish body of
paper.
2. Write conclusion,
appendix, and
bibliography.
3. Begin to proofread
and edit rough draft

Answer 45

well u wrote everything pretty much
u can just include details about culture media
different types
like blood agar as an example i gave you

Answer 46

Could you help me write the conclusion and appendix?

Answer 47

that's what I am struggling with

Answer 48

http://prntscr.com/66rrjz
this are this u would need to make a culture
(if you wish to detail it)
oh brilliant conclusion would be the purpose of culturing

Answer 49

in appendix part you can bring us statistics or like bring up one research paper name proving what you were telling about culture or something

Answer 50

talk about uses of culture - we get microorganisms in pure form - so we can use them to test drugs, or make drugs against the pathogenic ones, or to check their drug resistance to choose most suitable drug etc
sorry, os is lagging too bad