Question

I tried to write a Thank-You e-mail to my Professor

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-from my professor
Dear G,

Thank you for your email.
Sure, I would be more than happy to co-supervise you. Have you done any reading on VO2?

Best regards,
A

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-from me
Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. So far, I've read some literatures about VO2 and formulated the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email in case you would like to review it

Best regards,
G

Is this okay?

Answer 1

Yes, this is good

Answer 2

this is my first time , please help me

Answer 3

are you sure ??

Answer 4

yes

Answer 5

oke thank you @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 6

No Problem

Answer 7

I would change the word "literatures" to something else like "information" Literatures is not correct grammar. Also i would change "formulated" ...as written it sounds awkward.

Answer 8

What do you really mean by "formulated the form..."?

Answer 9

i mean "finding the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian

Answer 10

@Tjbrew

Answer 11

Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. So far, I've read some information about VO2 and found the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email in case you would like to review it

Best regards, G

Answer 12

I think that sounds fine now!! ;)

Answer 13

It reads well too!!

Answer 14

are you sure??

Answer 15

Absolutely!! I would have no problem sending that to my Professor!!

Answer 16

aww, ok thank you so much @Tjbrew :)

Answer 17

You are very welcome!! ;)

Answer 18

how if i change "found" with "worked" ?

Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. So far, I've read some information about VO2 and worked the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email in case you would like to review it

Best regards, G

Answer 19

@EclipsedStar @Tjbrew @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 20

Hmm.. I think you should add "worked on". ;)

Answer 21

Also, just a quick revisement. On the last sentence, "I have attached my work to this email in case you would like to review it " did you forget to add a period? :)

Answer 22

ah thank you @EclipsedStar

Answer 23

you mean

" I have attached my work to this email, in case you would like to review it "

??

Answer 24

Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. So far, I've read some information about VO2 and worked on the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email, in case you would like to review it

Best regards, G

Answer 25

Yeah I meant that XD Just add a period on the end of that sentence :)

Answer 26

ok thank you so much @EclipsedStar

Answer 27

No problem. It's great! :D

Answer 28

You deserve all the credit :D

Answer 29

thank you

Answer 30

Np! :)

Answer 31

how if i add "Yes" before "I have read" ??

Answer 32

Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. Yes, so far, I've read some information about VO2 and worked on the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email, in case you would like to review it

Best regards, G

Answer 33

" Dear Prof. A

I wanted to thank you for being willing to be my co-supervisor. Yes, so far, I have read some information about VO2 and worked on the form of the kinetic part of the hamiltonian for a system of VO2 by using the tight-binding method. I have attached my work to this email, in case you would like to review it.

Best regards, G "

Answer 34

I tweaked it a little XD

Answer 35

I think adding the "Yes" is a good addition. :)

Answer 36

ok thank you again @EclipsedStar ;)

Answer 37

Np! :)

Answer 38

then, i wonder how I should close the email?
@EclipsedStar @Tjbrew @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 39

then, i wonder how I should close the email. have you idea?
@EclipsedStar @Tjbrew @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 40

I'm sorry, I'm not sure by what you mean....XD

Answer 41

Oh, before you end it? Before "Best Regards"...?

Answer 42

i mean something like "Best regard". Is best regard enough to close the email?

Answer 43

Yes, or "Sincerely".

Answer 44

Most people use "Sincerely". :)

Answer 45

It's up to you, either way is fine. :D

Answer 46

yes i mean before best regards., you get the point! :)

Answer 47

I don't think that's necessary, honestly.. :)

Answer 48

Your email is fine the way it is now. :D

Answer 49

ok

Answer 50

Can we close this now? I mean I hate to be THAT GUY, but I want some new questions to answer incorrectly!