Okay so I'm supposed to write a poem that consists at least eight lines, includes an example of a hyperbole, and doesn't have a required rhyme scheme. This is what I came up with and I just want to make sure it looks fine.

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anonymous · Answer

Endless wonder

I sit 
Watching her face filled with sadness like stone
I’m patient as I wait for her spirit 
To light up her soul as it did at a time once known
Patiently waiting
So long like centuries of the universe passing by
Head starts aching
So bad it feels like I might even die
I can’t look at this blinding picture as it replays in my mind
Why is this world so filled with pain?
Yet it always seems so kind
But it feels like there’s nothing left to gain
We are still like trees
Slow as we grow
Losing our leaves
As it starts to snow 
We’re watching the world go by as time passes 
So still like life has been paused
The sun comes and goes like the lighting of matches
Filling up the sky as we wonder what caused 
My mind is an endless wonder
Who knows if I can help but always think
About her or any other
Lost in my own state of mind where all I can do is blink

anonymous · Answer

The site kind of messed with it but other than those question mark boxes its the entire poem.