Question

This song is from the heart and I need some one who know's how I feel to help me expand the song

Answer 1

Suicidal thoughts are what you feel
When you finally look around and see what is real
They talk about my clothes, my work, my hair
You hurt but you know that they don’t care
They make you cry
You don’t know why

Can you stop, can you stop what your doing
Throwing me out there like there’s nothing to it
Pleases won’t you just leave me alone
Why is it always me
Why is it always me
Why is it always me
Can’t you see?
I was in my room bleeding
From all of the pain your feeding
But nobody can see
And nobody understands anything about me

Now I’m thinking why me
Why should I live this misery?
All of the girls at school hate me
None of the guys there like me
My parents are always fighting
I tried to fit in
I changed all my clothes
But in the end I’m still known as a hoe

I keep looking for love in the slits on my wrist
I think the pain will go away if I’m gone
No one will notice… No No No No

Answer 2

@Tazmaniadevil @princesskole33 @swaggd2 @yharee @Wolverine32 @chycora

Answer 3

@andrewhaze

Answer 4

yes

Answer 5

its good

Answer 6

i read it yesterday

Answer 7

Oh lol do you have any ideas to make it longer or better?

Answer 8

no its fine the way it is :)

Answer 9

i like it

Answer 10

thanks

Answer 11

i cant change it not my song everyone has their way of writing i cant change that

Answer 12

welcome and i agree @andrewhaze

Answer 13

ok :) thats fine at least you like it

Answer 14

@randolal

Answer 15

i definetly like and will try add to more

Answer 16

@Zyi6

Answer 17

This is a song that I wrote