Question

so what do you think of this book idea thingy

You know the feeling when you tell someone your biggest secret. Yet they don't believe you. This is the feeling of loneliness and emptiness. This happened to a young girl many times and here is her story. The story of Midnight-stars the Kitsune.



Midnight looked up at the sky her brown and purple hair swayed in the wind. her blue eyes slowly changed from a dark to light blue, and she frowned. Her brown haired friend looked at her a wide smile on his face. it soon faded. "whats wrong" he asked turning his head to one side.

Answer 1

@TwilightRain1 :3 do you think I should continue this idea

Answer 2

@bohotness @Nnesha @DarkMoonZ

Answer 3

@MidnightTheWolf definitely. it sounds like it'll be good. let me read it when you're done ;)

Answer 4

arg, i mean @MinightTheWolfie

Answer 5

ok :3

Answer 6

thank you

Answer 7

np. here's a medal for encouragement :P

Answer 8

YAY

Answer 9

:D i would give you a star, too, but ik from past experience that is doesn't work. just turns into a bunch of question marks

Answer 10

wait, i'll try 🌟

Answer 11

nope. doesn't work

Answer 12

haha I just though of a new extention to it like she says

Secrets they are beautiful they are pure. Surrounded in light and pure joy. Some say that, but others say different things... They say Secrets are ugly putrid creatures horrible in all manners covered in darkness and hate. I don't believe that I believe secrets are on their own they are secrets that's all. Some are beautiful, Some are ugly. Mine are both beautiful yet they are putrid I want to tell you, Yet I can't. Why is it that secrets have to be so shrouded in mystery.
What ya think

Answer 13

ohh, nice :) i bet you're a good poet...

Answer 14

haha I work on it :3 so do you write

Answer 15

nope. i suck at writing :P. my sis is pretty good, though

Answer 16

Cool :3
how old is she :3

Answer 17

she's 12

Answer 18

cool im 13 you?

Answer 19

14

Answer 20

Cool ;3 huggiesssss

Answer 21

@SolomonZelman

Answer 22

u a girl or a guy?

Answer 23

girl ;3

Answer 24

me too

Answer 25

Yay ;3

Answer 26

well, nice ta meet ya :)

Answer 27

nice to meet ya

Answer 28

arg, this is driving me crazy. i can't get my score to go up to 60 :P

Answer 29

Ack that's annoying

Answer 30

I have to go SEE YA ROUND

Answer 31

cya! pm later :)

Answer 32

@MinightTheWolfie Please keep writing! It's a great idea and I can't wait to read the rest! Btw, I'm 13 as well

Answer 33

I love your idea and it sounds like it's gonna turn out awesome, I'm a writer too and I like to post my chapters on Wattpad so other people can critique my work. You should try that, and then we can keep up with it as you write :)

Answer 34

i agree with @cecormier. u should put it on wattpad. that's a great place for stories like yours...

Answer 35

ok cool

Answer 36

you have a great idea but your first paragraph thing is very cliche. theres some grammar errors but thats an easy fix. it sounds like you have a good idea but you didnt draw me in yet

Answer 37

i think this is ok.

Answer 38

ok? I think it's better :P XD

Answer 39

i think she could tweak it. like she looked at her brown haired friend? just say friend. sursly.

Answer 40

hmm ok so little things could be fixed, but overall it's really good,don't be so picky

Answer 41

whatever

Answer 42

Maybe instead of brown-haired, be descriptive and say "my friend with bright, blue eyes that were very watchful and kind with shining brown hair that looked like brown glass" maybe do something like that and be very detailed. @MinightTheWolfie

Answer 43

and yes, that sentence was badly written but it's just an idea :P

Answer 44

hmm good idea Thanks guys :3 im still bad with grammer and spelling but working on it right now im only 13 so im still in the waaayyy rough draft part

Answer 45

@MinightTheWolfie you'll get better ;)

Answer 46

You know the feeling when you tell someone your biggest secret. Yet they don't believe you. This is the feeling of loneliness and emptiness. This happened to a young girl many times and here is her story. The story of Midnight-stars the Kitsune.



Midnight looked up at the sky her brown and purple hair swayed in the wind. her blue eyes slowly changed from a dark to light blue, and she frowned. Her friend looked at her a wide smile on his face, but it soon faded as he saw her gazing at the woods a her eyes dark blue. "what's wrong" he asked turning his head to one side. Midnight sighed and looked at him.

"Secret are beautiful and pure. Surrounded in light and pure joy. Some may say that, but others may say secrets are ugly putrid creatures horrible in all manners covered in darkness and hate. Yet don't believe that I believe secrets are on their own creature, Each and every one, Yet they are all secrets. Some are beautiful, Some are ugly. Mine are both beautiful yet they are ugly I want to tell you, Yet I can't. Why is it that secrets have to be so shrouded in mystery."

she looked at him as his expression changed from frowning to complete confusion. He then ran his hand threw her long brown and purple hair. "hey I may not have understood all of that but I understood that you have secrets and I respect that Samantha." Midnight chuckled at the name. Samantha the name humans her friends knew her by. Her eyes changed from dark to a mix of sky and dark blue as she smiled at the forest. "don't you ever wonder what its like out there?'' she asks smiling. "ever wonder what its like to be a animal?"

Answer 47

better??

Answer 48

niiiiiiiice :) @MinightTheWolfie

Answer 49

yay :3