Question

:) anyone want to help me finish wiritign my book :D

Answer 1

What part do you need help with?

Answer 2

I would.....

Answer 3

i finished chapter one but i cant think of anything else so i need wirtiers to help me contuie writing

Answer 4

What's it about?

Answer 5

Ok, What type of book is it. And how would we help you? Do you have a link or a file?

Answer 6

horror :D

Answer 7

YEAH

Answer 8

ooh that sounds interesting

Answer 9

I have a horror/mystery book also. I am not done but if you want to look here is the link. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KONMKQjgSjFuuV04H0mJmisMMfGopPvkLfxfQkXLSzE/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 10

:D okay play x

Answer 11

okay xdddddd

Answer 12

:)

Answer 13

so, how would we find it....

Answer 14

https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=4379A9DF0BDC54B4!121&authkey=!AJ_81BYbbQ31pRM&ithint=file%2cdocx

Answer 15

I never knew there was a word online. Thats cool

Answer 16

lol ikr

Answer 17

:) It's good

Answer 18

But there are some grammatical errors

Answer 19

can you ghelp me fix my story?

Answer 20

yeah. I would have to re-read it, but yeah

Answer 21

okay i dont know howto spell some words sadly

Answer 22

Me neither.. sometimes.

Answer 23

Your real problem is tenses. You have a lot of past tense words but you write them as present.

Answer 24

okay

Answer 25

ohhhh

Answer 26

and do you want the reader to feel like she is reading it while it is happening? Because all of your writing is in past tense. Like she is recalling something.

Answer 27

Sweet, writing is my specialty... I'm currently writing my second book, but I'd love to help.

Answer 28

:) thank oyuy xd

Answer 29

OK, and there is A LOT of dialoge in here. And no spacing or any ("bleh") Why???

Answer 30

and, If you are writing this in the context of a older person, like 17 or 18. You may want to mature the speech up a bit.

Answer 31

thats why iopen this question iam not good at wirting books like this

Answer 32

Oh ok.

Answer 33

And can i change/possibly delete this sentence "As I sleep I feel as if someone or something is watching me sleep." Because you should have used different wording. Like
"As i lay there staring at the night sky, I feel someone watching me"

Answer 34

<,< its not someone theo because the readers dont know what it is yet so that would give away what it is

Answer 35

huh?

Answer 36

nvm

Answer 37

ok

Answer 38

I went through and fixed things I saw like capita, spelling and grammar, There were a few things I left alne tho because I wasn't sure

Answer 39

thanks :D

Answer 40

Welkstome :)

Answer 41

:dDDD

Answer 42

Here's my first book... hopefully this will help as an example... (It hasn't been edited yet so yes there are mistakes.)