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here this is my research PDf @shrutipande9

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@ganeshie8

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@wolfd.andi @alesia/bailey @sleepyhead314 @hartnn @Jhannybean @Kaileyycx

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vote this theory
agree or disagree

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plzz

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i think @Frostbite might want to take a look at this...

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@shrutipande9 did u read it?

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@Compassionate

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@wolfd.andi @alesia/bailey @sleepyhead314 @hartnn @Jhannybean

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@Frostbite vote my theory

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i know but that theory was stopped in middle

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i want to complete it

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see i have a question regarding that theory may i?

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how life came to mars before earth?

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see,,,what he is trying to tell u is....this theory has been shot to ground many times...have u tried to find out the reasons why? first find out why this was disproved. and then think of completing and then next step

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i have doubt @shrutipande9

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can u give me reasons for disproval

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soo
@shrutipande9 u ask me questions to disprove this theory

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I have no background in astrochemistry or space biology or whatever this would fit under, since you include multidisciplines in here, but I do have a lot of experience in reading reports and writing them as well as a somewhat fair understanding of basic chemistry that you included in your research.

Some comments I will make, for future reference (whether this is for college or high school level) is you need to \(\sf \color{red}{cite~your~sources}\)
I know this is not an english course, but in science, people need to know where you got your information from so that it can be given credibiltiy and also give YOU credit for knowing what you're talkng about and relating it to your research.

For example, you wrote:
"\(That’s ~the ~reason~ for ~more ~content ~of ~carbon ~dioxide ~(95.32 ~percent ) \)"
How did you come up with that number? 95.32%?

Also, your photos need to be given credit. Provide a link to where you got it from if it was taken from the web, or something that ssays where and when?

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I was referring to your quote
"That's the reason for more content of carbon dioxide (95.32%)"

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Also, in scientific research papers you want to avoid using first person words such as: I, me, etc.,

Stick to using third person (which is usually preferred and also much better). Because firstly, I don't think you did this mars experiment yourself by going to mars and found these percentages and collected samples of the compounds you discussed, like ferric oxide.

Instead, use something like, "it was observed that..."
or "what the image (or photo) suggests is..."

It's hard to do this, but you need to practice this if you want to pursue a degree in a science field.
Typically this is because research is done in groups and you also need more than one person present to help support your argument and say "yes, i was there and i can confirm that this is true"

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thank you @thadyoung

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thanks for your guidlines

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i may need your help in future

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so, be in touch