Question

Does this hyperbole look okay? I'll give medal.

Answer 1

Whats the hyperbole

Answer 2

Endless wonder
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I sit
Watching her face filled with sadness like stone
Im patient as I wait for her spirit
To light up her soul as it did at a time once known
Patiently waiting
So long like centuries of the universe passing by
Head starts aching
So bad it feels like I might even die
I cant look at this blinding moment but it replays in my mind
Why is this world so filled with pain?
Yet it always seems so kind
But it feels like theres nothing left to gain
We are so still like trees
Slow as we grow
Losing our leaves
As it starts to snow
Were watching the world go by as time passes
So still like as all life has been put on hold
The sun comes and goes like the lighting of matches
Filling up the sky as we wonder what it will behold
My mind is an endless wonder
Who knows if I can help but always think
About her or any other
Lost in my own state of mind where all I can do is blink

Answer 3

Better than what I can write

Answer 4

Some words I had to take out the apostrophe because the site messes with that kind of punctuation.

Answer 5

Thanks

Answer 6

Mild depression combined with ADHD helps good the ideas come I guess