Question

can someone help me with a resume?

Answer 1

Sure, let me see it

Answer 2

what is it?

Answer 3

I am reading it

Answer 4

This should look like this: University of California; Los Angeles, Cal Anticipated August 2015
Associate of Applied Science- Environmental Engineering Technology

In this part, what do you want to say about the most of how you want it to look like.It will be an good idea to think about catchy moments for the person reading what you are trying to say the most

Answer 5

okay..take your time

Answer 6

Bullet your duties here, and start with action verbs. You should not be writing in paragraph format

Maybe like this? Using the action verbs, start to bullet the duties here, write out any ideas and do not worry about paragraph form yet.

It will help if it was simple and catchy to do to engage the person

Answer 7

okay so i will certainly change what i have to the University of California; Los Angeles, Cal Anticipated August 2015.
So like this: University of California; Los Angeles, Cal. Anticipated August 2015
Associate of Applied Science- Environmental Engineering Technology

Answer 8

I like it now, it is way better

Answer 9

Give me some idea about your background/ why I would be interested in you. Try not to start with “I” so much

Write about simple background about yourself, even try to eliminate the word i the most, without using the word i try to write why i would be interested in you

Answer 10

Where does your experience stem from?

This question sounds easier to answer, but maybe with few more words it will help understand what the person wants maybe hint meanings of the word could mostly help to make things clear.

Answer 11

, no comma
what do you want to say more about this part?

commas can be used to separate different things

Answer 12

so for related projects hat about these for the action verbs:
related projects:
* implemented a watewater project
* composed a report
* arranged a presentation?

Answer 13

rewrite

What do you want to say more about this part, to say something again?

Answer 14

Check your flow. You want to be more descriptive about what your capstone is. Perhaps one paragraph could be about your capstone and the other about what you’ve learned in your program.

I really like your explanation, from this explanation, there is a few more to ad such as few details to be able to sum down to way more simplier way to underdstand clearly

Answer 15

sorry i am thinking on what i can say

Answer 16

. Your font size should not be bigger than 12

The font size should be times new roman size 12, and should not be bigger than this size

Answer 17

Anything i can help with?

Answer 18

so for related projects hat about these for the action verbs:
related projects:
* implemented a watewater project
* composed a report
* arranged a presentation?

I think of this part it can be composed report

Answer 19

yes i have composed report are you sayingit c an or can't be composedreport ?

Answer 20

yes it can be composed report

Answer 21

so that section looks good to you correct?

Answer 22

yes, it looks correct to me

Answer 23

great! now for the nextf ew sections it will take me some time but i will get back to you on those

Answer 24

ok, did you get my message?

Answer 25

yes

Answer 26

ok, let me check

Answer 27

I'm not sure... Is it supposed to be Cali not Cal
and also it says to use bullet points, not paragraph forms in a section