Question

This is my first poem I have ever wrote, and I know its a little depressing and really long, but it was all I could think of hahahaha. Please let me know what you think!!!

Answer 1

Happy seventh birthday sweetheart! Look what I got you!
Wow! Thanks Daddy, this is so awesome!
Oh your welcome princess, just never forget that I love you.
He gently kisses my head and sets me in bed, sweet dreams darling tomorrow we will get you new shoes.
Thank you daddy, I love you too.

Kayla look we’re moving to a new house!
It’s so much bigger and better, not like this one that’s smaller than a mouse!
Oh wow daddy! Will I have my own room?
Yes of course, you’ll even be able to pick your own colors!
This move definitely won’t be a bother!

Years pass I am now eleven, I am running late on getting ready, I have to fly.
I hear the ever so recognizable footsteps walking to my door.
Oh no! He has told me several times before to keep this room clean! But look at it now it’s worse than a pig sty!
It’s okay maybe he won’t notice, I will just have to distract him for the mess.
Hi Daddy! Which dress do you like more?
I ask as he stops at my door.

Kayla why the hell does your room look like this?
I know, Im sorry.I promise to clean it all when we get back
How many times to I have to tell you to clean it! I swear Im going to throw away all your crap!
Daddy I said Im sorry! Please just give me another chance!
I’ve given you plenty I’m not just going to watch this and sit back!

He walks over to my dresser, picking up my lotions one by one, yelling at the top of his lungs.
Why do you have so many! One should be enough! We spoil you too much!
I watched as he threw each bottle at the wall, leaving dents and explosions of lotion leaving marks on carpet.
Then walked over to my nightstand filled with picture frames.
With his arm he wiped the table clean knocking down every picture that came in its way.
Shattered glass and lotion all over the floor, was just too much for my young mind to watch or even stay.

Stop it right now! I shouted, I hate you! You’re not even my real Dad!
Instantly he stopped and looked back, and asked in a sorrowed voice what did you say?
My eyes filled with tears and my heart filled with rage yelled yet again, I SAID I HATE YOU, YOUR NOT EVEN MY REAL FATHER!

Not another word came out of him, he just simply walked out the door looking like he was ready to slaughter.

Many days past with him ignoring me, he was hurt you can see it in his eyes.
I didn’t mean to do that. I just wanted him to stop, but I guess I hit him in a really soft spot.

Daddy…? Can I talk to you?
Make it quick, its still hard to look at you.

Tears immediately flow through my eyes DADDY IM SORRY I DIDN’T KNOW THAT WAS TOO MUCH FOR YOU TO CHEW!
I DIDN’T MEAN IT I PROMISE; I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART. YOU’RE THE ONE WHO TOOK CARE OF ME NOT THE OTHER OLD FART!
PLEASE DON’T HATE ME, I DON’T LIKE THAT FEELING, I JUST WANT MY DADDY BACK! PLEASE TELL ME YOUR HEARING!
His eyes watered as he took me into a hug, I will always love you princess no matter what.

Many years have passed I am fifteen now. Throughout the years, we have had many more incidents, but I’ll spare you the details as it still hurts to think back and see I was always the right one.

We finally settled down and bought a house with the office he has always wanted and always warned for us not to enter it.
He has cameras set up around the house for intruders, though I always think he has them to watch our every move, not for what he claims it.

He has a camera watching directly at his office, but the rule of not entering was so stupid to me I often forgot it.

I was using my sisters phone when the battery stated dying, she said Oh the charger is in the office just go grab it.

Of course I did, entirely forgetting the rule, little did I know he was watching.

The next day he asked for the box of rubber bands which was in the office, so I ask my sister Hey Can you grab the box please? I am not allowed in the office.

He instantly shot up and said Like that has ever stopped you! I saw you through the cameras just last night! I have it saved right here!

At the time I was grounded and he had taken my phone away, so when he saw my sisters in hand he thought it was mine.

You snuck into the office to take your phone didn’t you?!
No! I promise That was Dani’s phone in my hand!
You’re a liar Kayla! You always were! You really think I will believe you now that I have you red handed?
Daddy I swear it was her’s! Zoom it in and see for your self!

I don’t need to! I can see for myself! I cannot believe you would dis obey me and still have the guts to talk!

The night was long with endless arguments, but in the end I was the obvious one with loss.

Kayla your nothing but a filthy selfish low life piece of sht! And I don’t want to see your face here in my house again!
Either you move out or stay in your room for the rest of your life! UNDERSTAND?

The only words I was able to utter were. Yes Daddy.

I sat for days in my room thinking of what he said, hating his every last existence, but couldn’t say what I said again.

Then one day I hear my mother pleading for him to let me out, and his response was
IM NOT HER FATHER, SHE CAN GO GET A JOB AND SUPPORT HERSELF, OR BETTER YET GO LIVE WITH THE DUMB FCK THAT ABONDONED HER. ISNT THAT RIGHT KAYLA? YOU SAID IT YOURSELF, YOU’RE NOT MY DAUGHTER.

It all clicked at that exact moment. All these years of him being distant and extra hard on me, was because of that one stupid sentence the sad little girl yelled out.

I know knew how much it hurt to hear those words. My heart sank and I didn’t want to move out of my spot for days.

He eventually let me out of my room and I made him a very sincere apology that I will never forget, and he accepted. We went back to being father and daughter, and had fun together all the time.

Two months have passed and I thought everything was fine until yesterday when my mother and I had an argument.

He walked up to me doing dishes and said.

If I have to hear your mother complaining about you one more time, I will put you back in there. Don’t you think because I let you out I won’t put you back.

Shocked, all I said was,

Yes Daddy.

Answer 2

@hysusonic @Legends @Awolflover1 @savanahdawson @beastieman21 @Teddyiswatshecallsme @TheRaggedyDoctor @5sauselover21 @just_one_last_goodbye

Answer 3

woah dude deep

Answer 4

@linn99123 @andrewhaze @akonkel @sammixboo

Answer 5

that brought a tear to my eye. that was so amazing but sad

Answer 6

Thank you beastie! ^_^

Answer 7

Lei....... I don't know what to say. That really broke my heart. I felt hopelessness, hurt and guilt, but non of that was what happened to me. I feel like I lived it. Your incredible.

Answer 8

oh wow its really, really good. U put a lot of thoughts and feelings with good emotions in to it!!! its really good lol i gota say im impressed :) good work!!

Answer 9

Thank you my loves <33

Answer 10

wow, i cant even....you know i knew all along I wasnt the only one..but no one else talked about it so i felt all alone. I hate my father but I love him....I want to leave and give up on him but I cant let him go. My stepfather reales me back in with his niceness but the next second yells at me for things I don't understand, but I blame myself because...well he wouldn't yell at me if it wasn't my fault right? Over time my hate for him became hate of myself. Its hard..its very hard....i just hope your relationship with your stepfather isn't lost like mine. Lots of Love <3

Answer 11

Was just a story, but Im here for you if you need it Chleo <33

Answer 12

oh, thxs

Answer 13

:O This poem is the best poem I ever read!!!!!!

Answer 14

Aww thank you Alls <33 Your amazeballs haha


NOW I HAVE TO GO, I'LL BRING YOU BACK A BLONDIE ;)

Answer 15

YAYYYYYYY

Answer 16

@isry98 This one!!

Answer 17

Oh my God, Lei. This just shattered my heart. </3
I love love LOVE it. The only thing that stopped me from crying was my lack of tears (I already cried it all out earlier when I dropped my nachos on my new shoes. I was more upset about the nachos, though) otherwise I'd be crying like a baby. So much pain D':

Answer 18

I have more to say, but it's late and I can't think straight.

Answer 19

Aww haha, ty Kiks <333

Answer 20

<333 ;)

Answer 21

Im so speechless rn, Like it is so beautiful and it jst mind blowing it was beautiful like I LOVE IT!!!! <3

Answer 22

really like it. This was beautiful but please remember to use quotation marks when you are using dialogue.

Answer 23

Thank you Lex!! <33


And Thank you Ispike!! I'll remember that next time!

Answer 24

Wow... just... damn, this is amazing... I felt like crying o-o Nice job though.

Answer 25

Np Layla!!

Answer 26

Thank you Logan!! <33

Answer 27

@LeilaJudeh too long ......lol...didn't read :P

Answer 28

nevertheless just for "FORMALITY" the poem was great.....lmao...xD

Answer 29

Holy ****. This is long but ill read it knowing its worth it ._.

Answer 30

Well...This is quite interesting...

Answer 31

wow, this is...wow. really good, sad but good.

Answer 32

:o bad or good tar?

And

Thank you Norma!!! <33

Answer 33

.....;=;

Answer 34

h,mmm the dad over reacted but good story

Answer 35

I know he did :) Thank you though!!! n.n