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OpenStudy (anonymous):

So for my essay in English I wrote "it was one heck of a journey these past four years, but it was worth it. " I wrote this in my senior project essay letter as a joke but I liked how it turned out and kept it in and my teacher edited it and said I had to choose another word or phrase to replace heck.... So should I replace it with hell or?

OpenStudy (ashleyisakitty):

Replace it with hell if you want your teacher to give you a low grade.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You don't get a low grade for putting hell in the essay although it's AP literature and composition hell won't make it low anyway I got a B+ on the rough draft so yeah

OpenStudy (anonymous):

But thanks

OpenStudy (ashleyisakitty):

I mean, If your teacher doesnt want you to say "heck", why do you think she would accept "hell". A simply inquiry... "It's been an tough but rewarding journey" or wording it along those lines can also be a replacement phrase.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That's perfect thanks :)

OpenStudy (ashleyisakitty):

NP!

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