Question

I made some poems if you want to hear; criticism is most preferred

Answer 1

“The winds of hate and hope”

The winds of hate oh do they blow
Strong and bold
Yet soft and tender
It will grow
You wish to let it go
Yet not it unwinds
You’re caught in the wind
Never to be let go
As the wind is inside of you
As it is part of you
The wind of hope as it blow
Soft and gentle
Yet strong and all mighty
It shall shrink as it grow
You wish to fly in it
Yet it drops you
It shall come back
And it shall vanish
For that is how the wind doth blow

Answer 2

@geneticrockhopper247 @GreenCat @bohotness

Answer 3

@cecormier @ispike

Answer 4

I love the constant personification of the wind throughout the poem...that was great!!

Some of your verbs were a little off, like, for example "It shall shrink as it grow." Grow needs to be grows. I know some poets twist their verbs to suit their rhyme, but, for me anyway, that's a little bit irritating.

Answer 5

ah i ment to put grows X3

Answer 6

“The winds of hate and hope”

The winds of hate oh do they blow
Strong and bold
Yet soft and tender
It shall grow
You wish it to let go
Yet not it unwinds
You’re caught in the wind
Never to be let go
As the wind is inside of you
As it is part of you
The wind of hope as it blow
Soft and gentle
Yet strong and stern
It shall shrink as it grows
You wish to fly within the worm
Yet it drops you to the cold
It shall come back and it shall vanish
For that is how the wind does blow

Answer 7

@RainbowBrony555

Answer 8

i fixed it

Answer 9

This is a great poem @MinightTheWolfie! :)

Answer 10

yay :3

Answer 11

:)

Answer 12

haha do you write poems

Answer 13

yep. I do. but they don't turn out good >.<

Answer 14

i wannna hear one

Answer 15

I don't have one :(

Answer 16

well make one

Answer 17

i do that all the time

Answer 18

I'll try

Answer 19

alright ill do one in 5 mins to

Answer 20

If life is but a dream
Then what is the dream
That we dream in the night
Where the darkness rain upon us
So we close our eye
To see that dream within the dream
Then arise to see the dream tis of life
But if not the dream thee see
We see the dark of the night rain upon our head
As if the night was saying thee to be near of death

Answer 21

@DarkMoonZ

Answer 22

@RainbowBrony555

Answer 23

That's a great poem to @MinightTheWolfie! :)

Answer 24

thanks now you try

Answer 25

Um..let me think

Answer 26

:3

Answer 27

Clean up clean up!
Everybody everywhere!
Clean up clean up!
Everybody do your share!

I suck in poems XD

Answer 28

XD

Answer 29

really come on try

Answer 30

I really don't know :(

Answer 31

come on just listen to your heart weirdo