Question

How are men treated in Iraq?

Answer 1

well it depends on what part of iraq u r in.

Answer 2

and which camp u r at

Answer 3

Can you help me redo a paragraph?

Answer 4

what is it about?

Answer 5

How do gender roles differ in Iraq

Answer 6

I did the paragraph but I need to redo it. Like switch it up

Answer 7

Do you want me to post it?

Answer 8

like what do you mean switch it up?

Answer 9

Like redo it. Make it into a new paragraph...

Answer 10

go ahead and post ur paragraph that u wrote

Answer 11

Life in Iraq has never been simple, regardless of gender; however, the lives of women are especially unfair. With that said, the overall basis of gender differences in Iraq are more specifically witnessed affecting the women of Iraq, leaving the presence of men in their society viewed to be much more significant. Everyday women and girls go through a great deal of hardships, one of the many being to deal with the abuse from men. Most of what these innocent women and girls put up with during their lifetime is gone without punishment based on the simple fact that their society views the female population simply as not being equal to that of the male. Along with the strict set of laws already set in the country, women have to follow their own separate set regulations, therefore, limiting much of the control they have over their own life. While struggling with the hope that someday they will be released of this life that they have, Iraqi women live in fear and misery, longing for a life of their own.

Answer 12

that is actually pretty good. that explains the customs that they follow. idk y u have to re-write it

Answer 13

Life in Iraq has never been straightforward, paying little heed to sex; then again, the lives of ladies are particularly out of line. So, the general premise of sexual orientation contrasts in Iraq are all the more particularly seen influencing the ladies of Iraq, leaving the vicinity of men in their general public saw to be substantially more noteworthy. Regular ladies and young ladies experience a lot of hardships, one of the numerous being to manage the misuse from men. The greater part of what these blameless ladies and young ladies endure amid their lifetime is gone without discipline in light of the straightforward reality that their general public perspectives the female populace basically as not being equivalent to that of the male. Alongside the strict arrangement of laws effectively set in the nation, ladies need to take after their own different set regulations, along these lines, restricting a great part of the control they have over their own particular life. While battling with the trust that sometime they will be discharged of this life that they have, Iraqi ladies live in trepidation and wretchedness, aching for their very own existence.

Answer 14

shes probably trying to paraphrase it idk tho

Answer 15

i have no idea

Answer 16

You did it perfectly. @terminally_capricous
Can you help me with 2 more?

Answer 17

for sure

Answer 18

im just flipping it out for synonyms so u might wanna go in and do a little bit of editing because some of them might not make sense

Answer 19

There is no other way to explain the life of an Iraqi woman except that it is difficult, permeated with great struggles and discrimination. With men as head of the family unit, women are not necessarily the dominate gender in society and are, therefore, trapped in a life they do not choose to have, but still manage to make get through it. If a man marries a woman then it is only the man’s choice whether to end the marriage or to continue to keep the marriage. A simple statement by a young woman in the article “Look Sad like an Iraqi Woman” by Hadani Ditmars, makes a comment of life in Iraq for women by directly saying “Life is difficult for Iraqi women, but we have always managed to survive” (16). In other words, in spite of everything that women and girls have to deal with during their everyday lives, they wield their way through life with their heads up. Fear lurks around every corner for these women. They are constantly in battle with society, and above all, the men. Either way, women go through life afraid, “I don’t want to say anything against the government or any parties. I’m worried there might be repercussions against me and my family” (16), says same young woman. Regarding this, women shut themselves off from the rest of the world because the lack of security women in Iraq face is a great issue. Cleary, without even knowing, the punishment women can face for speaking or doing something incorrectly can greatly affect and damage their lives. In any case, women being mistreated by the country, regardless of their actions, along with the problem of having no viable security, will happen anyways. Given these points, the typical day-to-day life of an Iraqi woman is looked upon being unfair and difficult, condemned to a life of inequality.

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There is no other approach to clarify the life of an Iraqi lady aside from that it is troublesome, penetrated with extraordinary battles and separation. With men as leader of the family unit, ladies are not so much the rule sexual orientation in the public eye and are, along these lines, caught in an existence they don't decide to have, yet at the same time figure out how to make traverse it. In the event that a man weds a lady then it is just the man's decision whether to end the marriage or to keep on keepping the marriage. A basic proclamation by a young lady in the article "Look Sad like an Iraqi Woman" by Hadani Ditmars, makes a remark of life in Iraq for ladies by specifically saying "Life is troublesome for Iraqi ladies, yet we have constantly figured out how to survive" (16). As it were, despite everything that ladies and young ladies need to manage amid their regular lives, they wield some way or another through existence with their heads up. Apprehension hides around every corner for these ladies. They are continually in fight with society, or more every one of, the men. In any case, ladies experience life anxious, "I would prefer not to say anything against the legislature or any gatherings. I'm concerned there may be repercussions against me and my family" (16), says same young lady. Concerning, ladies stop themselves from whatever remains of the world in light of the fact that the absence of security ladies in Iraq face is an incredible issue. Cleary, without notwithstanding knowing, the discipline ladies can confront for talking or doing something inaccurately can significantly influence and harm their lives. Regardless, ladies being abused by the nation, paying little respect to their activities, alongside the issue of having no reasonable security, will happen anyways. Given these focuses, the common normal existence of an Iraqi lady is looked after being uncalled for and troublesome, sentenced to an existence of imbalance.

Answer 21

ey do u still need help w/ that 3rd one

Answer 22

Now for as for education in Iraq, education at all levels is hindered by outdated curricula and teaching methods and poor infrastructure. Net primary enrolment dropped from 91% to 85% between 1990 and 2007, and is particularly low at 70% among girls in rural areas. Dropout rates between primary, intermediate and secondary levels are high: net intermediate enrolment is 39% while net secondary enrolment is just 21%. One in five Iraqis, aged 10 – 49, cannot read or write. There are significant disparities in literacy rates across gender, age and urban versus rural areas. Illiteracy among Iraqi women (24%) is more than double that of Iraqi men (11%). Rural populations are more adversely affected by Illiteracy (25%) than urban (14%) populations and within rural areas the literacy divide between men and women is wider.

Answer 23

I want each paragraph to be completely different but still have the same meaning.

Answer 24

@bibby

Answer 25

first step in rewriting something is understanding what the paragraph accomplishes . what is it trying to say? both as a piece of something greater and on its own.

The first sentence says that education is hindered (difficult/behind/backwards) because of outdated curriculums (course plans), teaching methods, and infrastructure (school systems)

Then it goes on to talk about how enrollment in schools has been dropping over the past few years. Especially for the rural female population.

Further statistics indicate that the rate of illiteracy in iraq is high (20% or people between 10-49). and that dropout rates between the different schools are high.

does that help at all? paraphrase that and use the statistics from the paragraph to rewrite it

Answer 26

What do you mean? All of these paragraphs are different. They are for my research paper.

Answer 27

I paraphrased the lasst paragraph for you

Answer 28

Okay, let me make it into a paragraph. Then I will ask you how it looks.

Answer 29

I need help with the second paragraph.. @rvc

Answer 30

well one user already helped you with the 1st para
similarily do the next one :)

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@Astrophysics

Answer 32

Seems you have more than enough help here, look at what bib said, just use his guidance and do it again, I don't think you'll really learn anything if I do it for you.

Answer 33

He helped me with the last paragraph. I need help with the 2 paragraph.

Answer 34

Its kinda hard though because the other kid used synonyms. And some of it doesn't make sense.

Answer 35

I'm a 12 year old girl trapped in a man's body
Address me with the appropriate pronouns darn it

Answer 36

that's what a lot of "rewriting" is. using synonyms and cutting the verbose parts. You want to maintain the clarity and direction of the original, retain the information, but not use their words.

Answer 37

Okay. So i will try to revise. Then I will ask for your help.

Answer 38

There is no other way to explain the life of an Iraqi woman except that it is difficult, permeated with great struggles and discrimination. With men as head of the family unit, women are not necessarily the dominate gender in society and are, therefore, trapped in a life they do not choose to have, but still manage to make get through it. If a man marries a woman then it is only the man’s choice whether to end the marriage or to continue to keep the marriage. In the article “Look Sad like an Iraqi Woman” by Hadani Ditmars there was a simple statement by a young woman. The young women makes a comment of life in Iraq for women by directly saying “Life is difficult for Iraqi women, but we have always managed to survive” (16). The young women is basically saying "in spite of everything that women and girls have to deal with during their everyday lives, they handle their way through life with their heads up." Women in Iraq are constantly in battle with society, and above all, the men. The same young women also says, “I don’t want to say anything against the government or any parties. I’m worried there might be repercussions against me and my family” (16). In regard to this, women shut themselves off from the rest of the world because the lack of security they get. The statement the young woman said seems if a women in Iraq speaks or does something incorrectly can greatly affect and damage their lives.

Answer 39

@bibby

Answer 40

I need an ending sentence, can you help me with that?

Answer 41

I really don't liike that first sentence. it isn't very objective which is the primary style of writing of a research paper.

also I suck at conclusions. I think they told me to restate the introduction back in high school

Answer 42

What should I say for the first sentence then?

Answer 43

This is only a paragraph. (Its part of the body.) I restate the introduction back in the last paragraph...

Answer 44

How about this: After what the young lady said it seems like the typical day-to-day life of an Iraqi woman is looked upon being uncalled for and difficult.

Answer 45

maybe something like "The life of an Iraqi woman is difficult, permeated with great struggles and discrimination."

It's still not very objective, but at least it's less awkwardly phrased

Answer 46

Okay. Cool. How was my last sentence?

Answer 47

also awkwardly phrased and has some poor grammar. hmmm, I suck at writing...

The statement the young woman gave shows that if a woman in Iraq speaks or does something incorrectly, it can greatly damage their life.

it feels so weird reading that idk why

Answer 48

So write it how you wrote it?

Answer 49

at the very least if you want to keep it your way, mind the grammar. women is plural, a women isn't correct.

also if it's women, then speaks isn't the proper verb
women speak
a woman speaks

Answer 50

idk if that sounds mean or annoyed but I didn't intend for that

Answer 51

I fixed that in Microsoft word. Haha

Answer 52

And No, it helps.. :)

Answer 53

One last question: Do you know what kind of jobs Iraqi women can have?

Answer 54

I googled around and found this http://www.iq.undp.org/content/dam/iraq/IQ%20Women%20EE%20-%20Final.pdf
page 14 has some information but nothing specific as to the types of jobs

looks like iraq really sucks

Answer 55

Thank you! You were a big help!

Answer 56

not really lol, I don't think I actually did anything, if you need help with a final proofread or whatever hmu bby girl
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and email: cutegirl2003@gmail.com

Answer 57

or just message/tag me

Answer 58

Okay. I will add you on snapchat right now

Answer 59

none of those accounts are real haha

Answer 60

Oh. Well now I look dumb

Answer 61

haha, sorry

Answer 62

go do your work dude

Answer 63

Lol its ookay. I will message you when Im done. Haha