Improve on my thesis?
My teacher kind of gave me a half-assed response to my question about how to strengthen my thesis, I think he wants it to be more universal? But I'm not sure how to make it more universal than it is:

Our values influence the choices we make because it is in human nature to acknowledge and protect what is important in our lives.

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Improve on my thesis?
My teacher kind of gave me a half-assed response to my question about how to strengthen my thesis, I think he wants it to be more universal? But I'm not sure how to make it more universal than it is:

Our values influence the choices we make because it is in human nature to acknowledge and protect what is important in our lives.

anonymous · Answer

What are the main points of your writing? Usually you want to touch on those in your thesis

ericwise · Answer

We are referencing two sources, one is a novel title Tuesdays with Morrie, the other is an excerpt fro the glass castle.The latter I can provide and should give the tending idea.

ericwise · Answer

Damn, I can't attach an image on mobile...

anonymous · Answer

I've read Tuesdays with Morrie. So you're wanting to write about the way the choices we make are influenced by our values? Because your thesis is good for such a broad idea. If you're going to be specific in your paragraphs, then I'd use examples in your thesis.