Question

Why didnt she want me? Wasn't i not good enough for you? All i wanted was someone to love me, even that you couldn't do. I was robbed of my childhood, my innocence was taken away, i never knew what love was then you gave me away. All i wanted was a family like other kids have, but you fostered me out to strangers when all i ever wanted was my real mom and dad. I just needed someone to love, but it wasnt meant to be. Although i always needed you mom, i knew you never needed me.

~From: Leah Rainwater
~To: Someone i never met

Answer 1

Damn that is intense

Answer 2

I feel her pain

Answer 3

Thank you:D

Answer 4

@fallenangelorchid how about dis one?

Answer 5

Incredible o-o

Answer 6

Any criticism? Anything i should changeee?

Answer 7

No o-o Its perfect

Answer 8

o.O O.o otay:D

Answer 9

thank you sir

Answer 10

I see a couple of capitalization errors and a double negative in the second sentence. And sentence four needs a semi colon rather than a comma.

But that's just me being a Grammar Nazi.

Answer 11

Great thanks;)

Answer 12

No problem :)

Answer 13

But, really, it's good. My cousin is adopted, and she has expressed many of those same concerns and emotions to me.

Answer 14

Yeah, its super difficult have the feeling of rejection is.... well... its somethin. But not alot of people know about this... i like to keep the unfortunate things in my life out of the lime light.

Answer 15

I know how you feel but the the other way I have a mom but I want a dad I have one but he is not all there he was in the war and now he has brain damage

Answer 16

all he does is watch tv

Answer 17

wow im so sorryD:

Answer 18

hey are you good in ELA

Answer 19

if so will you help me

Answer 20

Uh, i can try:)