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OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

WILL GIVE MEDAL AND FAN!!! Only have today to do it!!! Portfolio Assignment: Write a paragraph describing the differences between a calculated risk and an unnecessary chance. (Refer to p. 225 for help.) Provide at least one example of each.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

page 225

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

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OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

can you help with this i'm having soo much trouble with it

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@iYuko

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

hello @Here_to_Help15

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

can you plz help i'm having alot of trouble with this

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

and i have to finish it today

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

hi @Capnkookcx

OpenStudy (capnkookcx):

Well let me try. Calculated risk means like a hazard or chance of failure while unnecessary chance means like take a chance in other words.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

ok

OpenStudy (capnkookcx):

Do you understand it a little bit?

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

a little

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@Teddyiswatshecallsme can you help

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@Capnkookcx how do i make that into a paragraph

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@SolomonZelman

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i can

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

are you still here @FlexMasterMia1

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@wwhitlock @confluxepic an you help me with this i really need help

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

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OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

hello @wwhitlock thanks for coming

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

there is an attachment for this question you should look at it

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

@Teddyiswatshecallsme are you still here

OpenStudy (anonymous):

are they questions or what?

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

its just a short paragraph about the differences of them

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

hey @smiles=smiles

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

hi

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

The page you attached doesn't seem give definitions. So this is an "in your own words" thing. That's 2 sentences. And an example for each is at least 2 more sentences. That's enough for a paragraph. So, tell me, in your own word, what does calculated risk mean?

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

calculated risk is when someone takes a risk to prove himself

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

The word "calculated" means gathered all information you can about the situation and calculate your chances of success. Taking a calculated risk means you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Can you rewrite your definition using that information?

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

oh then what i said was the definition for unnecessary chance

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

You actually wrote an example of unnecessary chance.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

yeah that was by accident

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

all good

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

B)

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

For me, an example of a calculated risk would come from baseball. A runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

good example

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Your example of some trying to prove themselves without thinking of consequences is good. I know idiots who will get to a cliff where they've never been and jump off into water below with no idea what is under the water.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

yeah me 2

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

So, you think you have enough? Anything else I can do to help?

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

soo calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work and unnecessary chance when someone takes a risk to prove himself

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

so can we start writing the paragraph together

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

pretty much. But an unnecessary risk could be any risk that you haven't thought out. Yes, I'll help. Your first sentence is the definition of caulculated risk Here's what you wrote above: calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

and what was the example you said for it

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

The baseball one

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

ok let me find it

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

I wrote: an example of a calculated risk would come from baseball. A runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

oh thanks

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

so the first sentence could be something like this

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

Calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work like in baseball a runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

that is not a sentence more like a paragraph

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

You need to work on punctuation. Calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work. ln baseball, a runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Paragraphs can be as long as you need them to be. But yeah. If you want to start a new paragraph withe the definition of unnecessary risk that would work. May even impress your teacher.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

i was going to do it at the end and when were done we can make sure the grammar is good

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

ok, I wrote: an unnecessary risk could be any risk that you haven't thought out.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

ok

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

soo the next part would you write about how unnecessary risk is different from calculated chance or is that the next step

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

do you just write the definition and example for it the why they are different

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Just give your definition of unnecessary risk. Trust the reader can see the difference. Then give your example like you did with the first part.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Yes to your question.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

ok

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

Unnecessary risk is when someone takes a risk to prove himself for example.... what is an example of that

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

The cliff thing, I wrote: idiots who will get to a cliff where they've never been and jump off into water below with no idea what is under the water.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

Unnecessary risk is when someone takes a risk to prove himself for example when people who will go to a cliff where they've never been and jump off into water below with no idea what is under the water.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

Calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work. In baseball, a runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance. A unnecessary risk is when someone takes a risk to prove himself for example when people who will go to a cliff where they've never been and jump off into water below with no idea what is under the water.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Looks good. "An unnecessary" good job

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

The difference between a calculated risk and a unnecessary chance is that they are either thought threw or done without a thought about what could happen.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

does that make sense

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

Calculated risk is you've thought about it and think you have a pretty good chance of making it work. In baseball, a runner on first base watches the pitcher, adds in what he knows about the pitcher and catcher and then decides when and if he can steal second base. He may steal it or may get caught, but he won't try until he has calculated and thinks he has a good chance. An unnecessary risk is when someone takes a risk to prove himself for example when people who will go to a cliff where they've never been and jump off into water below with no idea what is under the water. The difference between a calculated risk and a unnecessary chance is that they are either thought threw or done without a thought about what could happen.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Yes, good. Check spelling. And I think you are good. Through not threw in this instance.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

do you want me to put in "through not threw in this instance" instead of "thought threw or done without a thought about what could happen."

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

no, the word you want is through. Threw, is past tense of throw. "think through" would be correct.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

You can tag me in your posts whenever you think I could help. I try to help as many as I can.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

so for the last sentence it is suppose to say The difference between a calculated risk and a unnecessary chance is that they are either thought throw or done without a think thought about what could happen.

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Yes. good.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

it does not make sense about the throw part

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

Sorry. I was just showing what throw means. Ignore throw and threw. They are not part of you paragraph

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

ok

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

thank you soooooo much i appreciate it

OpenStudy (wwhitlock):

You are welcome. And you are very patient to work this out. Good luck. You should get a good grade.

OpenStudy (skittles_for_life6422):

B) byeee

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