Question

I'm writing a short little essay thing explaining why i should be an officer for my thespian society. Which is basically a drama honors society. I need help writing this

Answer 1

Sorry idk if I can help any :/

Answer 2

Drama is my second home. Theater is my inspiration. Thespians is my community. Never in my life have I felt so a part of something! I look around at all these people I know and that I’ve meet and I think about how happy they make me. Drama is the place where I’ve felt the safest. This is the same place that I’ve seen myself and others grown, together. I’ve been a thespian for about a year now and all that year has done, has made me realize that I don’t want to be on the sidelines anymore. I want to be a leader and contributor. There are people who do and there are people who watch. I am the type of person who jumps in at any moment to help another with whatever they need. I’m involved in every event and opportunity that I hear about. This is why I want to spend my senior year, my last year as an officer.



this is what i have so far

i know i need to take out the sentence about being on the sideline

Answer 3

Nice job so far :) Just a few punctuation marks could be used. What I was looking at: This is why I want to spend my senior year, my last year, <-- added comma. Also, idk but should in the 3rd sentence, thespians be thespian's? Idk, but other than that, great job!

Answer 4

@pinkcandyrosez882 what about the actual writing thats what im working on right now i will worry about grammar later

Answer 5

oh ok sorry

Answer 6

lol no ur fine sooo what about the actual writing then. You can say it sucks as long as you tell me why this type of writing is not my forte.

Answer 7

@pinkcandyrosez882

Answer 8

@emblebee

Answer 9

i changed the first part one sec

Answer 10

You did a very nice job, and keep writing like that. If you want, you can even talk little about a few faults, but of course not too much. Just a thought :)

Answer 11

Drama is my second home. Theater is my inspiration. Thespians is my community. In my three years of drama, I have developed friendships, confidence, and life skills. While creating new passions I have discovered that I not only want to continue to be part of drama but finish my last year contributing as an officer.

Answer 12

and tell me all your thoughts (grammar aside for now at least) if i dont agreee i wont use it and thats fine but i want it to be perfect