Question

Can someone help me think of a beginning of a story I have to write! Please I need help asap.

Answer 1

@a1234

Answer 2

@TheSmartOne

Answer 3

What genre and age group is it supposed to be like?

Answer 4

Well first of all, I read this book called The Secret Garden and for my assiment I have to write a three paragraph story like thing about what happened before my story started. And im in 7th grade and yes I am allowed to be on Open Study becaue Im almost 14.

Answer 5

Just for backround information, my story is about this really rude spolied girl that lives in Asia (she is English) And she has survents, and no one really likes her because of her attitude.

Answer 6

@a1234

Answer 7

@Callisto

Answer 8

@confluxepic

Answer 9

I wasn't asking about your age, but about what age the story is for. Perhaps you could start out in a situation where she is being arrogant and then go into how no one likes her.

Answer 10

Oh ok, well I have no idea. How about I give you what I have been working on, and you tell me ways to make it better, is that ok?

Answer 11

@a1234

Answer 12

Okay

Answer 13

Oh and also, I need help with a word that decribes a teacher (her english governess) who is getting frustrated at her student (Mary the spoiled girl) And gets so mad that she gives up and quits (which is going to happpen)

Answer 14

irked, crabbed?

Answer 15

Thank! Im almost done.

Answer 16

One hot summer day, as Mary sat staring at the ceiling, while her english governess when on about how she never listened


This is what I have got so far, I have no idea what to say next.

Answer 17

"One hot summer day, as Mary sat staring at the ceiling, while her English governess when on about how she never listened"

You need to eliminate either the "as" or the "while." It's a bit confusing. So the teacher is talking about how Mary never pays attention in class?

Answer 18

ok I will get rid of the as, and I just noticed that I said when instead of went. And yes.

Answer 19

Next, perhaps you can say (in your own words) that her eyes slowly drifted from the ceiling to her teacher. Mary then talks back to her teacher.

Answer 20

Wow, thats great! Thank you for helping, I really appreciate it.

Answer 21

No problem :).