What do you think? Good or bad?

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anonymous · Answer

What is this for?

Some grammar is wrong. Like Princess to Princesses.
Also When you mention Your cousin in the beginning, say her name is Savannah. Because when you talk about Savannah, When don't know who she is, and the reader might think it is another person.

destinyyyy · Answer

@TobleroneJesus

anonymous · Answer

Okay I think that is good! You just need to fix up some grammar.

destinyyyy · Answer

Okay.. So just the ones you listed above? Or do you see more?

anonymous · Answer

Pretty good though, there are some grammar issues.

destinyyyy · Answer

Can you tell me what they are?

anonymous · Answer

*Last Sunday, 
*And my dog Luna.
*We dressed up and went along with the theme of each movie.
* With the sandwitch in it's mouth, we found Lilo and Stitch.
*Bell and the Beat (proper names need to be capitalized)

destinyyyy · Answer

Okay.. Nothing else?

anonymous · Answer

No I don't see anymore mistakes.

destinyyyy · Answer

Okay thank you.