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Wilfred Owen was a British soldier and poet who fought and died in World War 1. He wrote the poem, "Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori", which describes what war was like, and what he went through. Wilfred Owen’s language throughout this poem conveys feelings of fear, shock and anger. He watched people die. His fellow soldiers "went lame" and "became drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots / Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind." He describes seeing men who looks "like a devil's sick of sin" and hearing "the blood / Come gargling from the froth-corrupt

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Wilfred Owen was a British soldier and poet who fought and died in World War 1. He wrote the poem, "Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori", which describes what war was like, and what he went through. Wilfred Owen’s language throughout this poem conveys feelings of fear, shock and anger. He watched people die. His fellow soldiers "went lame" and "became drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots / Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind." He describes seeing men who looks "like a devil's sick of sin" and hearing "the blood / Come gargling from the froth-corrupt

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Wilfred Owen was a British soldier and poet who fought and died in World War 1. He wrote the poem, "Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori",(<- not sure what should be capitalized since I don't know the language) which describes what war was like, and what he went through. Wilfred Owen’s language throughout this poem conveys feelings of fear, shock, and anger. He watched people die. (<-this is sort of a random sentence, maybe change the flow a bit) His fellow soldiers "went lame" and "became drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots / Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind." He describes seeing men who looked(<- looked not looks) "like a devil's sick of sin" and hearing "the blood / Come gargling from the froth-corrupt