Question

Feedback on My poem that I wrote about 2 friends let me know what you think.

Answer 1

@sugarplum15
@bleebleebleed
@Thesmarterone
@DJBreezy
@unicorn_princess
@HelpBlahBlahBlah
@MAkaylabvb

Answer 2

I love it! :)

Answer 3

Thanks

Answer 4

That was awsome

Answer 5

Thank you

Answer 6

medalsss

Answer 7

omg luv it

Answer 8

Thanks @MAkaylabvb

Answer 9

@bleebleebleed

Answer 10

Nice job man! I really liked that:)

Answer 11

Thanks

Answer 12

Very nice!
The only "critique" I would have is that some parts of the poem had a slightly more formal tone than others. So, you could alter the word choice a bit so that your tone is consistant throughout the poem (if that interests you at all.) However, I did like it and if you don't want to change it you definitely do not have to it's YOUR art! :)

Answer 13

OMG ! You are very talented. I Really felt everything you said. Your words are powerful & very meaningful. I hope you take this talent further than just a hobby. I write also but you deff' showed me up lol. Keep it up. You made me cry and that doesnt happen often :)

Answer 14

Thank you @PrincessRu

Answer 15

Np Love :)